Fandom Naruto: Ryū no sensō

[LiteracyUnmatched]

xD and I got the idea for him hating Sayuri, from the canon version of Naruto. Neji got his cursed seal when he was four, and when Hinata turned 3. That's why he hated Hinata.

 

[LiteracyUnmatched]

Alright I changed it, into a normal jutsu, albeit aided with the byakugan. His other jutsu.. I got the inspiration from your rumble tumble. If you don't like my copying off of your originality tell me and I'll edit out of it. I also changed the hating of Sayuri to only the Main Branch.

 

[Razgriz]

too OP...

Alright first of all. That lightning jutsu has no weakness except that it is a close range attack. Second the phrase I highlighted "too OP" meaning you want him to be a bit op. Which goes against the entire meaning of this RP. I will explain it right now. This rp is about the lives of normal shinobi living their normal lives after the second shinobi war and during the third. Not once did I mention OP.

. His byakugan's perception is above average, and gives him a slight advantage over other Hyuga.

Third another example of trying to make him stronger then the others. Look understand this your character is a genin. He is a weakling. Any Jounin could kill him. Any of the jounin in this rp could kill him or any of the genin of this rp. Alright. The reason I stated that was this, you are making a character who is a weakling, who grows stronger as the rp continues. Not one who can fight against a jounin.


Last you need to add his jutsu, not saying all the basic jutsu from the academy. For some reason I feel like you would say that he knows more then six(which is the limit) jutsu. Please stop trying to get ahead of everyone else.


I am trying to work with you here. I am once again willing to help you make a character or edit the one you have. But right now I think it would be best for you to have a character without a kekkei genkai.

 

[LiteracyUnmatched]

Ah, sorry for taking up your time. But I think I'll just quit the RP. Thanks for all the help and everything @Dai tenshi

 

[LiteracyUnmatched]

It's not because I want my character to be OP, It's just really hard posting new CS every day. This RP is a bit more demanding than I though, sorry for wasting your time. I hope one day.. I'll be able to join

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

Welp,i'm looking foward to our sqaud doing well . Though i can't lie i feel like the odd person out cause Your two oc have senory/tracking ability .


@Nenma Takashi @Quiet

 

[Quiet]

We are the balanced squad here in Team 12, if we consider it through RPGS standards.


Kamui - Primary support, backup DPS. (Tracker/Healer.)


Kazuichi - Primary DPS , backup support.


Yasashii - Raw damage, primary defender.


Kazuichi takes the agility role and makes up for Yasashii's lack of agility and Kamui's inability to deal direct damage.


Yasashii makes up for Kazuichi's lack of raw power and Kamui's fragility.


Kamui makes up for the lack of support skill between both Yasashii and Kazuichi.

 

[Nenma Takashi]

Woah we really are a well balanced team can't wait for Kazuichi to screw up this amazing plan with trying to impress girls.

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

When you put it like that it seems fairly balance lol, now to work on the teamwork aspect. @Quiet


Gonna build character for the squad as a whole though iIfiguring his chances are fairly low but hey there a chance lol . @Nenma Takashi

 

[Pariah Stark]

My team is the most balanced.

 

[Quiet]

Arch, you aren't even i-


OHOHO YOU SLY DOG YOU.

 

[Pariah Stark]

@Quiet Suimaru is just gonna show up to be creepy, then leave... maybe exchange some dialogue. I just wanted to do something lol Even if it's trivial.

 

[SummerWolf]

Warning you all now,


My upcoming IC post will be posted from a mobile device, so my apologies if it isn't long enough. I'm not quite used to this device and how lengths match up yet.


On another note, after musical rehearsal today, probably, I'll finish up Niriko.

 

[SummerWolf]

Warning you all now,
My upcoming IC post will be posted from a mobile device, so my apologies if it isn't long enough. I'm not quite used to this device and how lengths match up yet.


On another note, after musical rehearsal today, probably, I'll finish up Niriko.

Well... I hate going back on my word all the time, but...


Rehearsal ended up running longer than expected and life just spiraled into the way...


As such, my plans to finish Niriko have been pushed to tomorrow. However, I'll have my post up in the next few minutes, hopefully.

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

Can't lie real life before virtual life you go ahead become the next American idol star . @SummerWolf

 

[Razgriz]

Well... I hate going back on my word all the time, but...
Rehearsal ended up running longer than expected and life just spiraled into the way...


As such, my plans to finish Niriko have been pushed to tomorrow. However, I'll have my post up in the next few minutes, hopefully.

It's fine summer. I would prefer you take care of you real life first. And it's understandable.

 

[Hanarei]

Harumai engaged!

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

I had no idea what kind of training Cale would start with so I ended up with a four legged race type deal Hopefully it works out better than I imagined.

 

[Hanarei]

I have to say, that is different.


In before everyone on the team is pros at walking on their hands!

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

Cale is very unorthodox.

 

[Hanarei]

Could be worst. Your training could be doing dodge ball training. If you can dodge a kunai, you can dodge a ball!

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

That would end with Cale being crushed by a large sign.

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

Four-legged race ,can't say I saw that coming sounds like they need some hurdles to heighten the difficulty .

 

[Seraph Darkfire]

It isn't like Cale is just going to watch them. Though I am also happy if other people make some trouble for them as well.

 

[Hanarei]

Meh, decided to put a Sayuri post. I decided to add a bit of a response considering her companions jumped ahead she would respond quickly, and I wanted to add a lil background goodness.