Maime
Praise Kier
- One on One
- Group
Notes: had a cute idea for a horror story. Very macabre yet humorous. Be warned this is a necromancer story so there is death and descriptions of decay and bodies/corpses.
Prologue: Every Horse Girl You Ever Met...Sorta
Mallory Jane McKinney wasn’t just a horse girl. She was the horse girl—the one who wore saddle boots to school and smelled faintly of hay even at prom. Her backpack had horse stickers. Her bedroom walls were covered in rosette ribbons. Her social calendar revolved entirely around grooming schedules, riding lessons, and Elvis.
Elvis was a towering black Hanoverian with a white blaze shaped kind of like the state of Florida if you squinted. He was all muscle and myth, with eyes so dark they looked like they were thinking about deep, philosophical issues. Mallory believed they were. She believed Elvis was special—maybe even magical. He always knew exactly how to move in the arena, like he was reading her mind. Like he wanted to win.
Together, they crushed competition after competition, until their living room looked like a shrine to equestrian excellence. She didn’t just love Elvis. She worshipped him. She whispered secrets into his velvety ears, kissed the dip between his eyes, and told people he was her soulmate, half-joking—but only half.
Then, one sunny Saturday in late spring, Elvis died.
He was grazing by the fence, the sun haloing his back, when his legs buckled. Just folded up underneath him like a house of cards. He hit the ground hard enough to startle birds from the trees. By the time Mallory got to him, he was gone—still warm, but unmistakably dead. His mouth hung open in a soft, slack O. His eyes, wide and glassy, caught the sun but didn’t return it.
The vet said it was an aneurysm. Fast. Painless. Nothing anyone could’ve done.
Mallory didn’t cry right away. She sat with his body for six hours. She braided his mane one last time. She wiped the flies off his face. When someone tried to help her up, she bit them.
After the burial, she didn’t go back to Fairview Stables. She stopped answering texts. She stopped eating anything that wasn’t freeze-dried or neon. Her mom signed her up for grief counseling. Mallory went to exactly one session, during which she calmly told the therapist that death was "just a very old habit" and that she planned to break it.
A week later, she checked out Introduction to Practical Necromancy from the county library.
“I’m looking for something with stronger results,” she told the clerk, a wiry man with a Dale Earnhardt Jr. tattoo on his neck.
“You mean… more advanced?” he asked.
Mallory’s eyes didn’t blink. “No,” she said. “I mean stronger."
Prologue: Every Horse Girl You Ever Met...Sorta
Mallory Jane McKinney wasn’t just a horse girl. She was the horse girl—the one who wore saddle boots to school and smelled faintly of hay even at prom. Her backpack had horse stickers. Her bedroom walls were covered in rosette ribbons. Her social calendar revolved entirely around grooming schedules, riding lessons, and Elvis.
Elvis was a towering black Hanoverian with a white blaze shaped kind of like the state of Florida if you squinted. He was all muscle and myth, with eyes so dark they looked like they were thinking about deep, philosophical issues. Mallory believed they were. She believed Elvis was special—maybe even magical. He always knew exactly how to move in the arena, like he was reading her mind. Like he wanted to win.
Together, they crushed competition after competition, until their living room looked like a shrine to equestrian excellence. She didn’t just love Elvis. She worshipped him. She whispered secrets into his velvety ears, kissed the dip between his eyes, and told people he was her soulmate, half-joking—but only half.
Then, one sunny Saturday in late spring, Elvis died.
He was grazing by the fence, the sun haloing his back, when his legs buckled. Just folded up underneath him like a house of cards. He hit the ground hard enough to startle birds from the trees. By the time Mallory got to him, he was gone—still warm, but unmistakably dead. His mouth hung open in a soft, slack O. His eyes, wide and glassy, caught the sun but didn’t return it.
The vet said it was an aneurysm. Fast. Painless. Nothing anyone could’ve done.
Mallory didn’t cry right away. She sat with his body for six hours. She braided his mane one last time. She wiped the flies off his face. When someone tried to help her up, she bit them.
After the burial, she didn’t go back to Fairview Stables. She stopped answering texts. She stopped eating anything that wasn’t freeze-dried or neon. Her mom signed her up for grief counseling. Mallory went to exactly one session, during which she calmly told the therapist that death was "just a very old habit" and that she planned to break it.
A week later, she checked out Introduction to Practical Necromancy from the county library.
“I’m looking for something with stronger results,” she told the clerk, a wiry man with a Dale Earnhardt Jr. tattoo on his neck.
“You mean… more advanced?” he asked.
Mallory’s eyes didn’t blink. “No,” she said. “I mean stronger."