My first bad poem

[The Fluffiest Floof]

I know there is no rhymes and stuff but I felt like writing this:


The Chosen


Once there was a person


chosen by fate


chosen to exceed them all


Led by a cause, a dream


strifing for a greater good,


the chosen travelled the lands


But struck by betrayal


hurt deep inside


the chosen lost her drive


The pain and the sadness


the feelings that overcame her


made her stop to strife for her cause


The dream and the personality


now burried and locked


lost till they would be freed


The outside of stone


but inside a gem


was her curse from that time to now


The one who shall free her


unveil what is hidden


shall be granted her greatest good, her love


And her love shall protect him


Never leave his side


Be his light in the dark.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Wow, thank you all, I never expected it to get even one like


@metalcity @Dibbydoo @ErikaRaven @ElizaVioly

 

[ErikaRaven]

Hey don't thank for that. I liked it because I found it interesting ^^


*gives chu bread* >.>

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Hey don't thank for that. I liked it because I found it interesting ^^
*gives chu bread* >.>

*eats bread eagerly* Still thanks. I like people liking things I did.

 

[ErikaRaven]

Keep on writing more poems ^.^

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

I will. But I don't want to force tha . I will write as soon as I feel like. That's how that one was created as well.

 

[ErikaRaven]

Yosh I understand what you mean

 

[Dibbydoo]

It's Fińe, it's really nice and deep, it doesn't have to rhyme.

 

[DreamBeat]

There's no rhyme, but it has meaning and a kind of groove

 

[ElizaVioly]

Nothing to thank for. I highly enjoyed you poem, it truly moved me!