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[AkuTheWolfOkami]

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[AkuTheWolfOkami]

Himura Kasumi
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  • Kasumi isn't imposing with her size, it is actually the quite opposite. She fits the sense of alluring, A sensual being. Attractive, and confident, as the deadly kunoichi should be. But beneath that soft skin, under the make up, behind those soft brown eyes is a killer.
    She comes in about the same height as most of the men in her clan, which adds to the appeal she has when she does missions under disguise. Long hair, which is naturally dark brown but changes as the mission calls for it, sits on top of her head. She prefers to keep it long, but if the mission were to call for it, she'd chop it off in a second. Her body is toned, but it isn't muscular by any means which can be deceiving on how much strength she actually has.
    Note: She generally wears armor than depicted below, (generally mirroring her other clansmen with the black under shirt, leather armor, and sometimes mail or plate) but this particular outfit sans the rest of the armor serves it place.
    
  
  
  She generally wears armor in the depiction below, but sometimes the scantly clad shirai-ryu uniform fits her mission.
  
  
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  HOMELAND/B]:Earthrealm, Japan
  
  
  Allegiance: Shirai-Ryu, Earthrealm
  
  
  NAME: (surname first) Hinura Kasumi
  
  
  AGE:20
  
  
  HEIGHT:5'7"
  
  
  WEIGHT:130
  
  
  
  
  
  

  
  
  

  
  
  
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  Scorpion tattoo on her right inner thigh.
  
  
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  Ah. The temptress Himura. Does she have a personality? The duty of a kunoichi has you wearing so many masks, it's hard to tell which are actually your's. Though she wears many masks wells, she does have her own distinct personality. An orphaned child raised by the clan, she has always been distrusting but loyal. She has issues with abandonment, but has a radical loyalty to the clan that saved her life. She could never imagine turning their back on them.
  
  
  With that being said, Kasumi is a very distant girl. She prefers to stay quiet, but hates to be alone. She often finds herself, mainly going over the thoughts of why her parents abandoned her. She is vicious, cold, and extremely sarcastic. The rare times she offers a smile, which are rarely even seen (because even in the company of her adopted family she keeps her actual yellow cloth mask on) , but when they are she is always complimented on a great smile and told to smile more.
  
  
  She is extremely disciplined when she is calm, precise, sharp, but sometimes her anger (her emotions in general) get the best of her. She trains daily, in every waking moment she can viably do it. Cunning, sharp, loyal, deadly.
  
  
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  Has a habit of looking away when she's asked about her honest opinion.
  
  
  

  
  
  
  

  
  
  
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  Cunning.
  
  
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  (kind of trash but i'll rewrite it after I put up an intro post tomorrow)
  
  
  
  
  
  Kasumi was born in the Earthrealm, Sapporo Japan. Her father was an American Marine, who had been stationed in Japan. Her mother? Well, much isn't known about her mother. Soon after her birth, Kasumi was taken by her father back to America, being raised in Georgia for a while before his disappearance when she was but 6. She was alone, left to fend for herself.
  
  
  She wanted her mom, and all her dad ever told of her mom was that she was from Japan. So there, that's where she went. It was a bit odd of a journey for a six year old, who managed to skate undetected as a parentless minor through TSA, before tracking down an appropriate flight, stowing away on it. It wouldn't be long before she found herself in Tokyo, but something wasn't right.
  
  
  The little girl removed a picture she had stuffed deep inside of her pockets, and glanced the picture over,"Ice monsters..." she whispered gently before looking over to where she was. There were no ice monsters in sight, just tall buildings and a bunch of people crowding the streets like ants.
  
  
  She had failed, she couldn't find her mother...but someone had found her. Dashing through the crowd was a masked man ready to pick up the little girl, but just as he reached out.....a kunai to the back, and down went the would be kidnapper.
  
  
  Much to her surprise, there was a man standing there in a black suit. She ran up quickly to the man, and hugged his leg tightly,"Tank you mister." This mister, was a genin of the Shirai-Ryu clan. The man would return with her to the clan's village.
  
  
  Years would pass, and the little girl was no longer little. She was one of the deadliest ninjas in Japan. Grandmaster Hanzo, had taken her under his wing, much to the dismay of Jubei...
  
  
  
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[NetherTacos]

Name: Sun Tang


Age: 28


Gender: Male


Birth Origin: China, Earthrealm


Allegiance: Shang Tsung


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Tall, dark-haired and nicely groomed, Tang is someone who takes great care in his looks. Serving as Shang Tsung's ambassador and fighter, Tang is impeccable when it comes to styling and fashion-wear, perhaps slightly campy.


He is amongst tallest of Tsung's subordinates, and most lavishily dressed out of them. Tang is always cleanly shaved, finding an idea of a beard rather abhorrent.


Fighting styles: Escrima, Krav Maga


Personality: Affable and well-mannered, Tang is a charming person with impeccable sense of loyalty. He is also rather friendly and merciful, considering murder to be a last resort in solving a situation. Despite the fact that he is generally a nice person, if you stand in his or Shang Tsung's way, Tang will dispose of you in a manner which he considers to be appropriate.


His forte is patience, which makes him perfect for long-term planning, and he is also rather laid-back but professional, making sure to fulfill orders which were given to him. All in all, great person if you are on his side, and a deadly enemy if you are against him.


Quirks/habits:


-tea making


-strategising


Strengths:


Intelligence


Loyalty


Patience


Weaknesses:


His sister ( Frost )


Heights


Rats





Backstory: born in a middle-class Chinese family, Tang's childhood was nothing extraordinary. His parents had lucrative but mysterious jobs, but Tang never cared about what they were doing for a living. Once his sister, Sun Biyu, was born, Tang's mother left her job in order to take care of Biyu.


Tang left his parents home when he was 20, and proceeded to use his good knowledge of martial arts to earn money. Tang's nice persona was very dissonant with


his job, and many who understimated him payed that mistake with broken bones and jaws. Eventually, Tang's fighting prowess reached the ears of Shang Tsung and the sorcerer offered him a place at his side. Tang immediatly took a liking in Shang Tsung's regal attitude, and he accepted the sorcerer's offer.


Shang Tsung gave him many assignments in order to test his competence and Tang completed most of them without any major issues. Tsung then pronounced him his ambassador and entrusted him with recruiting people across the realms to his cause. Not long afterwards, Tang found out that his sister, Sun Biyu, joined the Lin Kuei and took the name "Frost".


Writing sample: Greetings there! Want a cup of tea or perhaps some biscuits? Ah, so you want me to tell you about myself and how I got to where I am? Very well, sit back and pay close attention to my words.


As you might know, my name is Sun Tang and I was born in Macao, China. My parents had some sort of a secretive job, and that was all I knew in that regard. When I was 10, my beloved sister Sun Biyu was born, and that was the happiest moment in my existence. 10 years later, I moved out of my parents home, and had to indulge in acts of savagery (fighting) to earn money. My politeness was deceiving to my opponents, who believed I was a pushover....all of them ended up with severe injuries and concussions.


One day, I was approached by a sorcerer named Shang Tsung, who offered me a place at his side, promising great wealth and substantial rewards. I was astonished by his regal attitude and impeccable manners, so I accepted without hesitation. Afterwards, he sent me on couple of missions to Outworld, missions which involved 'removal' of certain elements of disturbance. After my successful endeavours, sorcerer named me his ambassador and bodyguard.


Then I heard that my sister joined the Lin Kuei clan, and took the name 'Frost'. With another Mortal Kombat tournament approaching, master Tsung is convinced that Lin Kuei will take part in it, and I suspect my sister will be among them as well. I just hope I can make her defect to my side...

 

[Vulkin Zephoore]

Name - Vulkin Zephoore


Age - 87


Gender - Male


Birth Origin - Outskirts of Outer Realm


Allegiance - Neutral Stance


Appearance: - Standing at about 8 1/2 feet tall, about 2 feet of that coming from his additional head design and the horns on it, his head level is about 6 1/2ft. His entire body is covered and plated in thick black, red, or white scales and under that a thickened skin/hide which add to his durabilities. He is a reptilian creature and has a snout, which has two horns, one just over his nose which is about 7 inches long and another one at his chin that is only 3 inches long. His head as various horns, be it ontop of his head or behind his jawlines, thus adding to the rough textures of his scales, he doesn't have the most appealing face to caress to say the least.


His backside has even more features, over the years horns had grown out from his back as well as bone layers. He has more horns and jagged spikes on his back that are well exposed and clear to be seen. Having two 16 inch spikes on his back aiming upwards and 2 6 inch spikes aiming downwards, he has been known to make use of this in kombat, though the result are unpleasant... for his opponent.


He also has a 5ft long tail which also as spikes grow out from it and the tip too is also a bladed tip, a tail alone would be a strong weapon with a lot of strength to strike an enemy, but that you can block, add jagged spikes its a even more deadly tool.


His legs are very strong, the structure in which they were evolved to (Or created by god (For those of you who may be offended by that term.)) allows him to leap high or sprint very quickly. Plus the strength in his legs can do out some punishment, and do to the hot sands and rough rocks of his homelands, he has no more feeling in his soles rather than feeling that he is on the ground (Standing on fire charcoal? Can do. Though his feet will be marked and burned, it's likely he won't even know.)


Fighting Styles: (I don't have much of a set one yet or know any that are similar to his own.)


Personality: - He has a somewhat of a dark personality, despite his dark and deep toned voice let allow his fierce and intimidating appearance


Strengths -


Takloree Body - (Durable hide and scales , Tail , Various horns.)


Disciplined Mind - (Patient , Skilled , Devotion )


Arc Sentinel - (Very skilled in combat , A brilliant leader , Highly Ranked in the Takloree Military.)


Weaknesses -


Cold Blooded - (Weakness to cold climates.)


Takloree Temper - (Can be easily provoked if the right words were brought up.)


His Back - (His large set of horns and bones that grow from his mack will be a unpleasant feeling if he were to land on them hard. )


Background-





(To understand him you'll have to understand his species as well so I'm going to make this as short as possible, want to know more just PM me... also he's a Star Wars Species... please, don't say "He can't use the force" despite he wouldn't really be using it, and tell me why Takeda, Kenshi, Ermac, Quan Chi, Raiden, Shinnok, Tremor, Kung Lao, Liu Kang, even Johnny Cage, have mystic abilities yet it's unfit for Vulkin to wield the Force AKA Telekenisis which he rarely uses as it is... don't get me started on his lightsaber I'll point out Takeda on that...)


So, where to being? Vulkin is a member of the Takloree Species. A reptilian race that strives in the harsh and brutal climates on the edges of the OuterRealm. Takloree are known for their mastery skills in survival and brilliant tactics. Despite they're a species mostly in poverty and most die at young ages due to their homelands, few survive but those that do become talented hunters and marksmen, soldiers fit for combat and show excellency in performance.


Though they are not barbaric, just do not come to their home and say they're filthy beggars or say you're higher than them because your race has money, reassuring they will do more than rip you in half, they're a species not to piss off. What they lack in numbers are regained in skill. But they are not overly aggressive, they don't much welcome outsiders so if you enter a Takloree tribe or village expect to have a lot of unwelcoming looks and lack of interest for business, unless you're going to their Warlord (Chief, Leader) who may be more negotiable depending on what it is you have come for.


As for Vulkin himself, he is a Takloree but he is what is known as a Arc Sentinel in Takloree Terms, a Takloree Sentinel is considered one gifted with supernatural abilities (Jedi), a Arc Sentinel is one who as mastered these abilities (Jedi Master), though unlike others, the Takloree do not send their Sentinel to some monastery or sacred temple to train their children in way of code and honor, actually most who gain this ability don't even know it under their child years. He was only 7 when he first began using them when he was hunting, and over the years he used them and trained himself with them, now over the years it wasn't until he was 64 he near mastered them and was 79 when he became the Arc Sentinel of the Takloree. And due to their low population, if there were to ever be a Arc sentinel there is only one around at any time, if lucky, two.


Vulkin has fought and won many battles, he is brilliant to strategy as is the rest of his people, war and victory, is in their blood. (Now for the Mortal Kombat cross over.) As of recent, he had come across a scroll when studying the arts of the former Arc Sentinels before him, he learned of their sacred amulet, the Binding of Sentinels, was given to raiden nearly 75 years ago. The Binding of Sentinels was forged hundreds of years ago, when there was a time when the Takloree had not 3, not even, four, but 5, 5 Arc Sentinels alive and together. These five united many clans and brought the Takloree to peace with each other and made their species one, and has been since then. To the Takloree they see Binding of Sentinels as humans see Jesus Christ, a very sacred and holy symbol, one that lifts hopes and pride. But how this came to Raiden, about 75 years ago after a devastating war, a Takloree Elder and two Warlord ventured far to Raiden's temple, a journey that took months, and bowed to him, begging for his aid as their species was on the very brink of extinction. One went as far as even grabbing hold of one of Raiden's ankles and praying to him, they needed help, and Raiden assured it will come for he felt sympathy for them and understood their need. In return, they gave to him the Amulet, the Binding of Sentinels, a amulet that even he has heard of and accepted it with honor. He had given them a quest to return to their homes and though it took months to return, they found their villages and tribes were indeed flourishing more so and their species was coming to return at a steady pace.


This perhaps was Raiden's doing but Vulkin, was furitated. Raiden bares their amulet? "A lowly scum of Earthrealm deemed to be a god?" He said. He didn't believe that Raiden aided them, instead the Takloree race regrew it's strength as they always have, they have been through many wars and some just a little worse then their most recent one and still made do. He first went to the Warlords who went there and challenged them, nearly beating the life from them despite how much he wanted to kill them for their acts that dishonored their species. He let the live, but he said if they did not throw them themselves into exile when he returned, he will kill them.


He gathered supplies and kissed his 3 wives and 5 children (He has had 4 wives and 18 children, the others have died and in modern dage he now only has 2 children) a farewell, saying he is leaving on a pilgrimage, which he was, but was never the full truth, for Takloree do not lie. He vowed to reclaim that amulet from Raiden, hoping he'll be there to be in his way so he doesn't just walk in and take it, he wants to teach that god a lesson as well. Though why he came to furious of Raiden, is because he believes that those gods don't care for their species and simply sheds them sympathy, which makes the Takloree look weak, he don't want their sympathy nor care for their respect.


His journey took him far to places he hasn't heard of and was rather, disgusted from. The cities of outworld were remarkably large but the civilization... made him feel sorry for the dirt it was built on. He still had a quest to perform, he traveled far and in due time, arrived at Raiden's temple on a cold night. He didn't sneak into it but instead he just walked in through the front doors and searched the temple and soon found the Amulet, disappointed he didn't come across Raiden. When he left it was raining and thunder boomed across the sky. He simply walked into the courtyard and stood waiting, for he knew what this meant and shortly after Raiden did arrive. The who spoke, Raiden knew who Vulkin was and respected that he came this far just to claim the amulet for the sacred beliefs of his people, but disapproved that why he was doing so.


Raiden took the amulet from Vulkin, teleporting it from his hand to his own, making Vulkin feel disgusted to see their sacred amulet in the bare hands of Raiden, it was only then he pulled out a small talisman, one Raiden had given to Vulkin ages ago, when Vulkin was only a child.


The story behind this was that just before Raiden aided the Takloree, he found Vulkin when he was 13, sleeping one night on a mountain with his rifle in arms. Raiden saw something in Vulkin, a greatness of a strong future and left him small talisman nearby before leaving, then gifting the entire land with rainfall that night and the next morning. Vulkin awoken when the rain began falling, he was happy and drank the fresh water as it fell, for just a light rain to Takloree is like golden coins raining from the sky for people. Rain is a blessing for the Takloree homeworld and this happened weekly for a long while and soon it changed to being more of an occurrence that happens yearly, on the month that amulet was given to him, it rains 3 times a week for 3 weeks, but the reason Raiden didn't keep this as a weekly or even a month celebration, is because he knows the Takloree needs to remain strong as they have been, but if anything, they deserve the rain, water isn't easy for them, it's they least they deserve. But as for Vulkin on that first night, when it was raining he stepped on the talisman, and when he looked down and picked it up, he did damage it, denting it lightly, but he studied the talisman and from there on, kept it.


Decades later when he encountered Raiden as a foe, he threw that talisman to Raiden's feet, Raiden was surprised that Vulkin had kept and treasured his giving that was more than 70 years old, and even brought it with him. But when Raiden looked back it was too late, Vulkin took advantage of that time and charged the god, the moment he looked to Vulkin, his face was met with Vulkin's fist, punching the god and throwing him to his back a few feet away and saying "There's my sympathy for you."


Vulkin showed a great level of hate, but strength as well. Raiden stood and shook off that punch and could only ask for Vulkin's forgiveness for what it was he was about to do. The two fought, Vulkin using his abilities to make his faster and even slightly bend the direction of Raiden's lightning strikes away from himself. the two were struck many times, Raiden was hit by the powerful physical attacks delivered by Vulkin as Vulkin was struck in very small weak points of his body by Raiden's own attacks as well as the electrocuting blasts he could form. It was when Raiden kicked Vulkin back into a charcoal pit onto his back, Vulkin rolled off of it and back to his feet with burns on his back and withdrew his saber, the red beam of light sizzling as the rain dropped to it. Raiden countered with his own staff and when they continued on their fight, Vulkin's saber couldn't cut through or even damage Raiden's staff which was made from his own powers.


The battle had last for nearly 40 minutes and it all came to an end. In the last moments of their fight Vulkin and Raiden threw aside their weapons and resumed hand-to-hand but in the very last moment Raiden managed to punch Vulkin in his throat then grab onto his head and deliver a powerful and shocking strike of lightning which nearly friend Vulkin and nearly killing him. While this happened, Vulkin managed to grab onto Raiden's wrists and with a powerful push of his own abilities a electrical explosion occurred and both were shot back and Vulkin as left steaming and still. Raiden was left standing, battered and beaten, but he barely stood as Vulkin was left near lifeless, all that Vulkin was able to o was breathe deeply as each breath was a painful wheeze, his body was very weak from both the inside and out, he would die if left in his state for under his skin and within him, his body was failing and not functioning properly. Raiden respected this from Vulkin, how far he was willing to go for his people.


Vulkin would awaken to find himself laying down... on his back, in a bed. it was the first time in ages he had woken up to see the ceiling first, his back forbid him to lay on it but with a very soft sheet he was laying on, it allowed him to. He was under blankets and his head in a pillow, these were luxuries that few had from his people, and it felt... relaxing. When he got himself out of bed he looked to see he was wearing white robes, his weapons and armor was on display on a table nearby, but on a stand just next to his bed, the talisman he always had and the amulet he had come for, was just next to it.


He studied both the amulet and talisman before he stood and got out of his robe and put his original wear back on and after a moment to himself, he left the room and both the talisman and amulet behind. Before he could leave the temple, Raiden made his presence know, asking him if he intended to leave without having a meal or drink. Vulkin wanted neither, he only sought to leave, but Raiden spoke to him, saying that Vulkin wielded such great courage and honor for his people, what he was willing to do for them. His skill in combat is great, his heart lies true to aid his people, but there is more he can become. He even compared him to Kung Lao and Lui Kang, his two fallen friends he beloved as sons.


This caught Vulkin's attention, he thought about it and turned to face him, only to mutter, "Rare meat, no chop sticks." And so the two then found themselves sitting at a low table, Raiden serving Vulkin a hot cup of tea as Vulkin had a dish before him and two small bowls of mixture, one being a green paste he was unaware of. And feeling insulted that within his fingers he was using chopsticks, Raiden taught him how to use them in a matter of minutes while Vulkin awaited his meal. Vulkin was always a quick learner, he adapted quickly for a Takloree it was learn fast or die. And he was also very unfamiliar with his dish and this way he had to eat. To eat slowly take small bites, eat small bits at a time using chop sticks, and be very clean... to him this was something he saw would be in hell, and saw he better start getting use to this in this case. Even when he was eating Raiden offered him to try the other sides that were offered to him, unaware of how to try them he picked up the small bowl that had the green paste Raiden warning him it was Wasabi, though Vulkin didn't know what that was, and he lifted the bowl to his lips and simply took it as it was and swallowed down in one gulp. He froze for a moment and shivered, tingled even before clicking his lips and complementing it was a fine sauce, that it packed a punch and was rather bitter. Raiden said no comment to that before he just stirred Vulkin's tea before serving it to him. (# Wasabi - if you got this far.)


Though it was after the meal, despite Vulkin only had maybe just a mouthful of food and thought that was simply a appetizer, but was disappointed to learn it was main course, but still, his respects to Raiden were kept. Raiden then asked why Vulkin was going to leave without neither the talisman he's kept for so long or the Amulet he has long traveled and even fought to return, but the response was simple. Vulkin claimed he didn't earn to return the Amulet as well as he he does not deserve Raiden's Talisman. There was a talk of sorrow words, Vulkin was down in his mind and heart now, he had traveled all this way and lost, he made threats in his home that now he cannot return to because of this defeat, and he is now lost on what to do. But not all was lost, Raiden gave him guidance, to do what any other should do, return home, rejoice with his family. Though, al Vulkin can say, is that it is not so easy. What had happened, the fight between them, his defeat was a dishonor to himself, but Raiden still spoke words of encouragement, that he understands the reasons why Vulkin had arrived, he knew of his intentions and the risks of challenging him. It was a very long talk.


Things were settled in the end, Vulkin will plan out what will be done from here, his path will be his own, leaving behind both the talisman he carried for over 70 years, and the amulet he came to retrieve, but Raiden did offer if he needs guidance, his temple will always be open.


Thus Vulkin had left and made his way back to outworld, though upon his arrival, it was a raining night. He climbed the nearest tallest mountain and stood at its peak, overlooking the land and to the dark skies above, and when he had raised his hand, he can see the power that flowed around him, the ability of lightning, is his new path.


--- Okay so this concludes his legacy, also, about 6 years later Shinnok arrives again from Quan Chi so you have an idea that during MKX he is about 93. I also forgot to mention, Takloree live to be 380 years old so Vulkin is still young. Asides from all that howdy hey, this is Vulkin's Legacy in Mortal Kombat, well, mostly there is still more. But um... remember how I said I'd make it as short as possible? Yah, you're looking at, okay okay, I know I know I could of made it shorter but this is the short version of his legacy, I repeat, the short version. Want to know the long version? I'll be happy to send over the Fanfiction. Let me know your thoughts.---


Writing sample: Is this still necessary? If so hold onto your butts because Chapter 2 begins....

 

[AkuTheWolfOkami]

Hey mate. In this story Raiden (and shinook even) are still Elder Gods and have not taken a "mortal" form. They don't participate in "Kombat" and never have.

 

[Vulkin Zephoore]

Hey mate. In this story Raiden (and shinook even) are still Elder Gods and have not taken a "mortal" form. They don't participate in "Kombat" and never have.

Oh... Well... Wish I would of known that then before I spent a couple of hours typing that out.

 

[AkuTheWolfOkami]

I thought I put it in the overview, but it was in the interest thread.