Masha Le'Reign

[The Witch Son]

So this character is for a court intrigue roleplay setting, and mind you the kingdoms of the setting are generally made up but intended to be realistic. As in no orcs or elves, just humans and old arthurian/tudor like kingdoms. I am looking for feedback on this character because they are very... unconventional as far as customs for the setting goes. I just want to make sure the idea is presented in a way that doesn't seem sue-ish or unrealistic. Critique is welcome, suggestions more so. Without further ado:


Here is Masha, her profile is hosted on a tab on another site, the link takes you directly to her profile. I'm not sure how to use the coding here on these forums yet so best to look at her in the format I intended.

 

[Idrat]

This sounds really interesting; once I have more time I'll give you some well-thought-out feedback on this