Story Looking for Advice on a Story

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Hey there yall! Belle/Tink here. As we all know, I love to write. Usually ill write & roleplay in the 3rd person, but i have a story i want to tell, and it would be in first person. I have about two chapters so far, but im struggling with something, only i dont know what. Maybe bc its 1st opposed to 3rd person? Anyway, id really love some feedback!

the story is on docs, i can give you the link via PM or discord. (Tinkii#2463)

thank yall so much!!

EDIT: I totally forgot to say what the story is about! Its a YA type novel thing, a coming of age story about a girl who meets the wrong type of boy.
 
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