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Maggie stared down the double doors of the station, she'd been hesitant to take on such an assignment, but...the orders came from above, so there really was no choice in the matter, regardless of whether or not she'd been deceived into agreeing before knowing all the details - infiltrate, and uncover the truth, that was her objective; whispers of dirty dealings had made their way up to HQ, as well as potential connections to an underground drug ring, which was nothing out of the ordinary, and nothing she hadn't handled before...but usually, she'd run solo.
This was not to be the case this time...ohhh no - this time, her cover was to be a transfer from another department a county over, sent to be the new partner of one Detective Laurence Blake, and there in lied the problem...Maggie didn't work with others...period...things only got messy when she was put on a team, not only due to her own lack of social skills, but also because she almost always wound up dragging her partner's around by the nose, but...there was just no helping it in this case.
'Just suck it up...this should be a nice, easy case...should maybe take a few weeks...a month max...you can do this.' she told herself as she made her way up the steps, and pushed open the door, 'Just play the part of the good-natured transfer case, get in, get out...nothing to it.' Maggie mused, absentmindedly brushing her bangs away from her face as she approached the front desk and donned a congenial mask, complete with a feigned, warm smile as she approached the secretary, "Good afternoon, I'm Deputy First Class, Margaret Stein from the King County precinct, here to see Detective Blake?"
The man behind the desk eyed her critically - it wasn't that big of a surprise though...she didn't really look the part; a slight, five-foot four-inch babyfaced woman with freckles dusted across her cheeks, and a blinded eye, scar peeking out from above and below the fabric of her eyepatch, but the look of skepticism was quickly exchanged for one of sympathy, "Down the hall and to the right, you can't miss it...and hey...better you than me." he remarked, making her raise an eyebrow at him questioningly, only to have him shake his head, "You'll see." was the only reply she received.
'Must be a real charmer to get a warning straight out the gate.' Maggie mused as she made her way to the door, and with little to no hesitation, rapping on it sharply with the backs of her knuckles.
This was not to be the case this time...ohhh no - this time, her cover was to be a transfer from another department a county over, sent to be the new partner of one Detective Laurence Blake, and there in lied the problem...Maggie didn't work with others...period...things only got messy when she was put on a team, not only due to her own lack of social skills, but also because she almost always wound up dragging her partner's around by the nose, but...there was just no helping it in this case.
'Just suck it up...this should be a nice, easy case...should maybe take a few weeks...a month max...you can do this.' she told herself as she made her way up the steps, and pushed open the door, 'Just play the part of the good-natured transfer case, get in, get out...nothing to it.' Maggie mused, absentmindedly brushing her bangs away from her face as she approached the front desk and donned a congenial mask, complete with a feigned, warm smile as she approached the secretary, "Good afternoon, I'm Deputy First Class, Margaret Stein from the King County precinct, here to see Detective Blake?"
The man behind the desk eyed her critically - it wasn't that big of a surprise though...she didn't really look the part; a slight, five-foot four-inch babyfaced woman with freckles dusted across her cheeks, and a blinded eye, scar peeking out from above and below the fabric of her eyepatch, but the look of skepticism was quickly exchanged for one of sympathy, "Down the hall and to the right, you can't miss it...and hey...better you than me." he remarked, making her raise an eyebrow at him questioningly, only to have him shake his head, "You'll see." was the only reply she received.
'Must be a real charmer to get a warning straight out the gate.' Maggie mused as she made her way to the door, and with little to no hesitation, rapping on it sharply with the backs of her knuckles.
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