Evergreen98
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....what the heck... are they all one person?
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Yes, one person. I'd say around thirteen "official" identities though as existent in government records, so xDEvergreen98 said:....what the heck... are they all one person?
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Peaceswore said:Personally I think that OP as fudge. The SDHL should only have one SDHL. I mean you already have the prodigy, which means she is basically perfect at almost everything. So really.... I don't like that character *shrug* My opinion
Actually, prodigy doesn't mean perfect. She basically just has business/academic skills, with social skills hitting a flat zero and thus making her so imperfect. No matter how good the academics and business skills, they're of no use if the person can't apply them :x
Also, yes. There was an explicit rule that the e-handbook could not be tampered with. It's how the gang figured out the killer in the second trial, I believe.Peaceswore said:Yeah I have no problem with that (though I don't think you can reprogram the E hand book) ((Not sure, but I don't think Chihiro could because of some rule or something of the sort))
Not create new talents to adapt to them, actually... She already had those as natural talents, so really she can just adapt to become a new identity.Nonagon said:Honestly, that new character is interesting. I like her- complex, well-developed, interesting. However, for this setting, she's definitely overpowered. My main reason for saying this is that she can not only adapt herself into other appearances but create new talents at will that are associated with them. That oversteps considerably, considering everyone else is limited to one.
Not really a Genocider Sho split personality thing, as it's not some kind of major mental change or anything. Technically not three, more like a Chihiro thing pretending to be the opposite gender.StrawberryDessert said:No offense, but that doesn't make it much better. It's still overlapping three talents (and technically three whole characters) into one. I understand the whole Syo-like split identity, but it's a bit far-fetched. D:
That's thirteen identities, not thirteen talents. I previously said she doesn't create talents for personalities, I said she created the personalities with her talents. Really, you're trying to argue I have thirteen talents when I only (at present time) have three down. In other words, your point about creating talents doesn't stand, and in its place you've formed a completely different point to try and claim it as what you'd previously said :xNonagon said:You listed out more than one SHSL. If she's adapting to talents she already has, then she as a singular entity has multiple SHSL titles. My point still stands.
The title that allows her to 'adapt to any of 13-ish talents' (thirteen being the number you gave in the character profile) is in itself overpowered.
I personally prefer not get help, as I feel it's not my own original work if I do get help. I mean, I know my characters are usually quite bad, but I still prefer those bad characters being 100% my own work. Thank you for the offer though :xStrawberryDessert said:No, no! We're not trying to bash you, it's okay. No one is trying to attack you, we're just trying to make sure that everything is being played fair. Do you want help?
No no, all of my characters are bad. I've acknowledged this since I started creating characters :x It's better than how I used to call them horrible, so that's a plus compared to when I first started :xVentuswill said:Your character isn't bad, there's nothing wrong on the development level. She just might not quite be fit for this setting. Get what I mean?
Seconded.Ventuswill said:Just to make it clear: Your character is fine, on a basic level of skill and writing. It's obvious that you put in a lot of time, effort and love. It's just not all right to have a character with three talents, and I'm a bit worried that a character that swaps identities often may disrupt the writing flow.
I'm talking overall, I know my characters are bad :xVentuswill said:Just to make it clear: Your character is fine, on a basic level of skill and writing. It's obvious that you put in a lot of time, effort and love. It's just not all right to have a character with three talents, and I'm a bit worried that a character that swaps identities often may disrupt the writing flow.
It's not really me saying bashing in a "being harsh" way, but rather me saying I don't like how everybody's pushing for a point when they don't need to because I already admitted beforehand that the character was going overboard :xNonagon said:Sorry if it seems like I'm being harsh! I'm just trying to riddle this out in order to understand your thinking on the matter. I tend to get in debates a lot, but I know it isn't easy for some people to understand the difference between attacking an argument and ad hominem.
I already know that an overboard character isn't acceptable, which is why I'm trying to get some edits in but people keep pushing their points, so I can't focus on the character without looking like I'm ignoring everybody because I think my character's better than everybody's or something... I don't wanna be that guy who seems to ignore everybody because they can't take comments that don't reflect perfectly positive things >~<Ventuswill said:Mmhm, we know. We're just saying that... we can't accept it if it's overboard. That might be why we're all trying to pitch in and help, so that you can have your second character here with us! The more, the merrier, right?