I'd like feed-back on this city.

[StarHawk]

So for the exalted game we're playing, we're encouraged to make up more places in the scavenger lands. I'd like some outsider feed back, so I'm posting linkage here.


Without further adieu... I give you Manoa Lyken.


Feedback welcome, also if I get no feedback, it will garner the same result. Just let me know if you hate it or not, generally.

 

[NateDojo]

I kind of like it, and I'm interested in why Harper Little Foot is hanging around a little village like that, and all sorts of histories. Of course, that takes massive amounts of work, but it seems pretty darn interesting. I like it.

 

[Brickwall]

"Sheepkin"? I can see why he took someone else's name. His mother must have gotten called all kinds of horrible things.

 

[cyl]

Very nice community I could use in my on going abyssal game :wink:

 

[brennanhawkwood]

Pretty decent...especially as a place that could prove interesting and/or have hooks for PCs. The write-up itself has a few rough spots as far as readability, but is in no way unreadable. I would be interested in a ball-park figure on the population of the community.