Commission I can draw ya'lls character

[inactivesorry]

Listen


I will draw your character if you can give me writing advice or link me to a person who does oc rwby rps


also i need practice sO HEY


REQUESTS


Just give me a good reference. A picture, or a good description. If it's a shallow description, I'll probably improvise a bit.


It'll probably be waist up


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Also also- It'll probably be bad lineart and painted colors underneath


Or something


I don't know if I'm practicing lineart or painting or what god help me

 

[inactivesorry]

Personality traits would be great, too!

 

[spookie]

i'd be interested, what kind of writing advice are you looking for?

 

[inactivesorry]

i'd be interested, what kind of writing advice are you looking for?

Great; Uh, the advice?


Preferably keys to description, but any kind will do.

 

[spookie]

so are you looking for advice on character description, setting description, emotional description? all of the above? 


and would you like me to post my oc's info here?

 

[inactivesorry]

Ah, my apologies for not specifying.


Ya'know roleplaying/writing? Description, lik that. Not like having a paragraph of actions


Yes! That would be great, thank you

 

[spookie]

so would you like me to share the advice here as well, or in a pm?


this is my character's sheet, but you certainly don't need to read all of it! there's a picture i drew of him at the bottom, and a physical description and personality description as well. thank you, and let me know if you have any questions ^^

 

[inactivesorry]

so would you like me to share the advice here as well, or in a pm?


this is my character's sheet, but you certainly don't need to read all of it! there's a picture i drew of him at the bottom, and a physical description and personality description as well. thank you, and let me know if you have any questions ^^

I suppose pm? Probably so it'd be easier to fall back on, or something


Thank you! Try my best to have it done by tomorrow

 

[spookie]

awesome, thank you! i will write out the advice and send it to you either tonight or early tomorrow ^^

 

[inactivesorry]

jk i did it tonight


I hope you don't mind the sweatshirt, I have a love for stripes over folds, and i couldn't help myself lol

 

[KiKi Kitsune]

OOHHH your art is pretty *^* I don't know if I can give advice, but I would be happy to try help! Or else, perhaps an AT if my art would interest you by any chance >.> If that sounds okay, I would like to request art from you ;-;

 

[Vagabond Spectre]

I would like to request art from you also.

 

[inactivesorry]

OOHHH your art is pretty *^* I don't know if I can give advice, but I would be happy to try help! Or else, perhaps an AT if my art would interest you by any chance >.> If that sounds okay, I would like to request art from you ;-;

Thank you!


Ah, don't worry about the advice. I've never actually done an art trade, so I'm down for that; Just shot me a pm, and we can send our characters

I would like to request art from you also.

Alright! Yeah, just post your character. I'll try to get it done when I get home today.

 

[Entarriance]

heyg!! i absolutely adore your art style, the colouring style you have is so weird to describe, but in a good way u kno. Like something about it seems so smooth and it's very pleasing to look at , and the whole colour palette going on over there looks darn nifty (whether it be from the character desc or not you made the lighting and shading go very well with it!!). I really like how you draw hair especially, everything looks all soft ;o; 


I look forward to the things that you draw on this thread yo!!

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hahaha id love to have a request from u!! maybe potential art trade in the future if you're up for it just maymabe.


btw they're all in like groups of 4 for most but d.w they're just all in a gang they're like family you dont actually need to draw 4 just pick whatever looks aesrhetic and fun to draw man!!

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oh, you said personality traits were also a good add-in


Purple (Jeson Mor): Flamboyant, sparkly, super charismatic flirtatious guy!! He probably has his own fanclub, who knows, but he sparkles no a daily basis with a life supply of roses by his side. A bit on the overconfident side, though he has absolutely no endurance you can step in his foot and he's dead. Insanely theatrical and sometimes speaks in 3rd personal narrative for an extended monologue. 



Red  (Go): Insanely irritable and hot tempered and pretty ready for a fight. The shortest at 5'3, though also the eldest at 19. Swears the most, and is an all around angry person who you can piss off with just about anything. Though he's a bit on the embarrassed side of things and quickly gets mad if you try and call him out of something to hide his embarrassment. He's like buff though so he can actually fight you and probably has killed a person.


Black (Chess): Actually a girl! Typically with a tired expression, though she's quick to aim a gun at anyone. Pros to working as a hitman. Has tons of social anxiety and relies on the rest of group when it comes to talking, though they're the only one that can beat Red in a 1v1 (maybe because she has a gun) and is rather indifferent and apathetic, expressing very little emotion. The cool black haired emotionless character cliche. Less cool more of tired and in need of morning coffee.


Green (Xiangqi): A big dad!!! A genuinelly caring good person who has a fond love of plants and anything relating to botany. He's good at taking care of everyone, makes his own tea. He's just the parental figure that the group never had, yelling at everyone for misbehaving and consoles them with all with their problems. He's easily flustered and fairly timid, though he isn't socially inept since he's pretty sociable. Probably the most 'normal' character out of them all. He likes reading and he aims to graduate highschool and get into college to become a doctor. 

i love you

 

[KingofAesir]

Hiya! I love the way your style looks. Do you mind drawing my OC Madalyn for me? I guess I could give you some sort of advice on anything you want really, just do the know how good it'll be. Here's a reference for Madalyn.

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 Also here's a little personality for her.

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Madalyn Steed- Maddy is a tough sort. She tends to stand her ground, even if it's the wrong ground to stand upon. Stubborn is more like it. She has a tendency to get angry quickly and will lash out rather suddenly. Maddy is a bit detached from the world and could care less about the people around her.


To give some positive sides to her, she's a naturally kind and helpful person, willing to go out of her way to help a friend. She's also extremely loyal and will do anything for those she loves.


(This is just sorta something a wrote down real quick. Sorry if its not that good.)

Thank you!

 

[The Mechanist]

Can you draw the Mechanist?


i may even make it my profile picture if I really like it ^-^


I suppose I could help you with your writing, I've written countless research papers for the research that I do and assist with at the coastal labs here in south Texas. So I'm good at writing!


we could also do an art trade!

 

[Communist]

I can't give you many advice, but the best way to improve your writing is to simply take your time to write. Don't rush it, think first.


Also, if you don't mind could you draw the following


A dark humanoid creature (basically, his body is made out of darkness), he has a purple circle with no center on the front of his face (it occupies most of his face... and well, the circle is basically his face) and three purple lines, one on the right, one on the left and one on the cener of the body. Let me describe that better. Basically, all of the purple lines on his body are connected to the circle on his face, and two of them go from the circle to the palm of the hands (circle > arm > hand) while the other one goes from the circle to the bottom where it splits up into two lines and goes for his two feet (but you said you'd only draw the upper body so I don't think you need to know this).

 

[inactivesorry]

heyg!! i absolutely adore your art style, the colouring style you have is so weird to describe, but in a good way u kno. Like something about it seems so smooth and it's very pleasing to look at , and the whole colour palette going on over there looks darn nifty (whether it be from the character desc or not you made the lighting and shading go very well with it!!). I really like how you draw hair especially, everything looks all soft ;o; 


I look forward to the things that you draw on this thread yo!!

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hahaha id love to have a request from u!! maybe potential art trade in the future if you're up for it just maymabe.


btw they're all in like groups of 4 for most but d.w they're just all in a gang they're like family you dont actually need to draw 4 just pick whatever looks aesrhetic and fun to draw man!!

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oh, you said personality traits were also a good add-in


Purple (Jeson Mor): Flamboyant, sparkly, super charismatic flirtatious guy!! He probably has his own fanclub, who knows, but he sparkles no a daily basis with a life supply of roses by his side. A bit on the overconfident side, though he has absolutely no endurance you can step in his foot and he's dead. Insanely theatrical and sometimes speaks in 3rd personal narrative for an extended monologue. 



Red  (Go): Insanely irritable and hot tempered and pretty ready for a fight. The shortest at 5'3, though also the eldest at 19. Swears the most, and is an all around angry person who you can piss off with just about anything. Though he's a bit on the embarrassed side of things and quickly gets mad if you try and call him out of something to hide his embarrassment. He's like buff though so he can actually fight you and probably has killed a person.


Black (Chess): Actually a girl! Typically with a tired expression, though she's quick to aim a gun at anyone. Pros to working as a hitman. Has tons of social anxiety and relies on the rest of group when it comes to talking, though they're the only one that can beat Red in a 1v1 (maybe because she has a gun) and is rather indifferent and apathetic, expressing very little emotion. The cool black haired emotionless character cliche. Less cool more of tired and in need of morning coffee.


Green (Xiangqi): A big dad!!! A genuinelly caring good person who has a fond love of plants and anything relating to botany. He's good at taking care of everyone, makes his own tea. He's just the parental figure that the group never had, yelling at everyone for misbehaving and consoles them with all with their problems. He's easily flustered and fairly timid, though he isn't socially inept since he's pretty sociable. Probably the most 'normal' character out of them all. He likes reading and he aims to graduate highschool and get into college to become a doctor. 

i love you

Thank you!


Ah, I just have a habit of adding neon lighting to the opposing side from the main light source, ya'know? Thank you, I read this and was grinning like an idiot

 

[inactivesorry]

Hiya! I love the way your style looks. Do you mind drawing my OC Madalyn for me? I guess I could give you some sort of advice on anything you want really, just do the know how good it'll be. Here's a reference for Madalyn.

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 Also here's a little personality for her.

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Madalyn Steed- Maddy is a tough sort. She tends to stand her ground, even if it's the wrong ground to stand upon. Stubborn is more like it. She has a tendency to get angry quickly and will lash out rather suddenly. Maddy is a bit detached from the world and could care less about the people around her.


To give some positive sides to her, she's a naturally kind and helpful person, willing to go out of her way to help a friend. She's also extremely loyal and will do anything for those she loves.


(This is just sorta something a wrote down real quick. Sorry if its not that good.)

Thank you!

Sure thing! She's very pretty, I loveher braid.


The advice? Maybe how to add detail to writing, not just to have a paragraph of action. But if thats not your strong suit, anything is fine!

 

[inactivesorry]

Can you draw the Mechanist?View attachment 241721


i may even make it my profile picture if I really like it ^-^


I suppose I could help you with your writing, I've written countless research papers for the research that I do and assist with at the coastal labs here in south Texas. So I'm good at writing!


we could also do an art trade!

An art trade sounds cool, whichever you prefer!


uwu


Anyway- I'm not the best at drawing metal, but I've recently textured it for a rwby weapon and it was p fun, I'm down for it.

I can't give you many advice, but the best way to improve your writing is to simply take your time to write. Don't rush it, think first.


Also, if you don't mind could you draw the following


A dark humanoid creature (basically, his body is made out of darkness), he has a purple circle with no center on the front of his face (it occupies most of his face... and well, the circle is basically his face) and three purple lines, one on the right, one on the left and one on the cener of the body. Let me describe that better. Basically, all of the purple lines on his body are connected to the circle on his face, and two of them go from the circle to the palm of the hands (circle > arm > hand) while the other one goes from the circle to the bottom where it splits up into two lines and goes for his two feet (but you said you'd only draw the upper body so I don't think you need to know this).

I can try my best!


Yeah, unfortunately that is the ultimate advice. I'm just impatient af lol

 

[The Mechanist]

An art trade sounds cool, whichever you prefer!


uwu


Anyway- I'm not the best at drawing metal, but I've recently textured it for a rwby weapon and it was p fun, I'm down for it.


I can try my best!


Yeah, unfortunately that is the ultimate advice. I'm just impatient af lol

Haha it doesn't have to be textured  as long as looks how it's supposed to, you can even pose him heroically if you wish. Just so you know my art is traditional, I use pencil and paper ^^"

 

[inactivesorry]

Haha it doesn't have to be textured  as long as looks how it's supposed to, you can even pose him heroically if you wish. Just so you know my art is traditional, I use pencil and paper ^^"

Idk what I'll do; it just kind of gives it that realistic vibe


That's fine! Drop me a pm, and I can give you references, if you do want to do the art trade.

 

[spookie]

jk i did it tonight


I hope you don't mind the sweatshirt, I have a love for stripes over folds, and i couldn't help myself lol


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^-^ wow he looks so beautiful and classy! I LOVE your style! and the stripes are totally fine, i can easily see him wearing that type of thing :3


 i'm working on a nice 6-8 paragraph piece of advice... sorry it's taking so long, blame high school ;-;

 

[o l i]

Would you mind me requesting art from you as well? From what I've seen I really like your art style. It'd of an oc by the way. If you're not taking requests though (anymore anyway) I won't act super salty about it.

 

[inactivesorry]

Would you mind me requesting art from you as well? From what I've seen I really like your art style. It'd of an oc by the way. If you're not taking requests though (anymore anyway) I won't act super salty about it.

Yes, it's completely fine! There are a few people infront, but I should get em done by Friday.


Just send me a reference, or description.