One x One Help me become detailed please

[MaidenOfStars]

I would like to become really detailed with writing responses to roleplays.
Can anyone help? That would be wonderful. We could do a roleplay.
I can do sort of detailed though the way I roleplay is more simple then the way they do on this site
You could message me for more details, thanks!

 

[SINNyorita]

Heyya!

The fact that you want to do better at t itself is a start. We can help you out. For starters can you share how old you are (not a necessary benchmark, but kinda gives me the idea on what kinda literature you would have read) and what is your exposure to RPing?

Also if english is your mother tongue or second language of communication. I know a lot of RPers who are great with plot and character but hold back from long posts as English doesnt make them comfortable. Its nothing to be embarrassed about. I am not a native English speaker either. And when I started I used to write short posts. But then things started to change when i started to imagine each plot situation from multiple angles and think carefully what the character must have felt and what they must have done (in accordance with the plot)

You can ping me anytime if you want to discuss this further.

 

[MaidenOfStars]

Would you want to do a role play with me? Although I won't give my age I am decently above my grade average with writing but want to boost it more.

 

[SINNyorita]

Would love to but currently my hands are full with THIS Rpg. Infact we are looking for a 3rd member, but we need someone who is well adapted to complex plots and multiple NPCs and long posts.

 

[SINNyorita]

But if you want I can always help you practice over PMs etc.