smooshie
can't touch this
Mirai-chan
Currently there is 1 WIP and 1 completed CS for the Hunter Role. Since they were submitted in the same day and neither have yet been approved, I will extend 24 hours (1pm EST 4/23) for your WIP to be completed before reviewing and making my decision.
AstroBunny
Thank you for the submission! I'm giving all WIP's 24 hours to complete their CS's for a fair review so you should receive an official response from me before tomorrow afternoon.
- One thing I do want to note is that none of the cast members would have been able to escape the Lab at any given point. I don't mind if Bee was always on the loose inside the Lab and causing trouble, but this was a high security facility and repeated attempts at escape would have earned him time in cages or constant restraints (maybe even frequent sedation). His sample was cute to read and doesn't need to pertain to the accuracy of the story so you won't need to change that portion, but edits will need to be made to his 'Life in the Lab' section.
- I would also advise removing 'stunning hiss' as an ability, or elaborating how it works (as of right now I'm not sure how a hiss could stun)
Currently there is 1 WIP and 1 completed CS for the Hunter Role. Since they were submitted in the same day and neither have yet been approved, I will extend 24 hours (1pm EST 4/23) for your WIP to be completed before reviewing and making my decision.
AstroBunny
Thank you for the submission! I'm giving all WIP's 24 hours to complete their CS's for a fair review so you should receive an official response from me before tomorrow afternoon.
- One thing I do want to note is that none of the cast members would have been able to escape the Lab at any given point. I don't mind if Bee was always on the loose inside the Lab and causing trouble, but this was a high security facility and repeated attempts at escape would have earned him time in cages or constant restraints (maybe even frequent sedation). His sample was cute to read and doesn't need to pertain to the accuracy of the story so you won't need to change that portion, but edits will need to be made to his 'Life in the Lab' section.
- I would also advise removing 'stunning hiss' as an ability, or elaborating how it works (as of right now I'm not sure how a hiss could stun)