Realistic or Modern Die SchattenKlauen[CS]

[The_Omega_Effect]

Here you can post your CS where you will await approval from me or The Fluffiest Floof with either a response or a like. Please keep in mind that your character should not be too overpowered, and their strengths and weaknesses should more or less balance out. Every character will wear their country's flag along with the emblem of "Die SchattenKlauen" on their uniform.

Appearance(Image required.):

Name:

Age (Has to be more than 23 but no older than 37):

Selected Role:

Gender:

Height:

Weight:

Sexual Orientation:

Country of origin(Name along with flag if possible):

Backstory (Could be revealed in the RP or not revealed at all):

Personality:

Likes:

Dislikes:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Extras:

Interest check
OOC
IC

 

[StriderBro]

Appearance(Image required.):
Below
Name:
David "Dave" Banner
Age (Has to be more than 23 but no older than 37):
31
Selected Role:
Technician
Gender:
Male
Height:
6'1"
Weight:
176 lbs
Sexual Orientation:
Straight
Country of origin(Name along with flag if possible):
Australia
Backstory (Could be revealed in the RP or not revealed at all):
TBA in rp
Personality:
Snarky, sarcastic, analytical. Not a care in the world
Likes:
Getting under people's skin, knowing people's secrets, tinkering with machines and computers
Dislikes:
Criticism, bees, being outside, being told what to do
Strengths:
A tactical and mechanical genius. Can arrange a auto turret in under thirty seconds. A marksman with a pistol and expert freerunner to get to tactical locations for turret set ups and hacking
Weaknesses:
His own ego, lack of respect
Extras:

 

[_Exodus_]

Appearance(Image required.):

Armor:

Name:
David Thomas
Age:
25
Selected Role:
Breacher
Gender:
Male
Height:
6' 2"
Weight:
189
Sexual Orientation:
Straight
Country of origin:
England
Backstory:
David was raised in an English castle. He was raised to be proper and stern. His mother was adamant he acted like his father, a wise noble man. David thought otherwise. He wanted to be a knight, strong and true, loyal and courteous. He snuck out everyday and began training with weapons of all kinds. His favorite weapon became a heavy Sledge hammer. Over time he gained much strength by lifting this hammer. When he became of 20 years of age, David set out on a personal journey, seeking adventure. When he hears of the rebels who sought to take away the peace, David was astonished. He signed up immediately to join the special task force.
Learning new ways of fighting alongside new technology. He exchanged his knights armor for a tactical suit.

Personality:
If the situation calls for it, David will crack a joke. He usually is a man of discipline and skill. He accepts challenges as if it were a glass of water. David is a caring man, wanting to help everyone, friend and foe

He is usually seen as a strong and devoted leader, taking on many challenges. He has a work hard attitude and will attain anything by doing so. He won't give up, even if it means his immensely demise. A victory is worth more than a defeat and slaughter of the many.
Likes:
A good story
History
A good battle
Dislikes:
Wars
Rebels
Alligators
Strengths:
Physical strength
A careful demeanor
Weaknesses:
Legs
Quick, sharp attacks
Extras:
Loves to tell stories to young people.
Emblem in the organisation:

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[The_Omega_Effect]

Appearance(Image required.):

(Guy on the right)

Full body

Face

Name: Nikolai Andreyevitch Loskov

Age : 23 years old

Selected Role: Stealth

Gender: Male

Height: 5'8 / 173 cm

Weight: 137 lbs / 62 kg

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Country of origin: Russia

Backstory: Revealed in the RP

Personality:
Nikolai has an incredibly dark sense of humour. This would be obvious to anybody if he made jokes at all. It all stems from his very serious attitude he always kept while training. His focus was always finishing the mission with nothing else taking priority.

He never was the direct type of person. This is heavily displayed by his role and how he completes his missions. He is always indirect, preferring to leave as little a trace as possible behind every single one of his moves.

He is used to being a lone wolf as all of his missions before now included him working alone. And the prospect of having friends to talk to never appealed to him. This lead to him being very selfish, only rarely being nice. However, if he does indeed find a friend or two, he will cherish them greatly and be loyal to them.

Likes:
+Completing his mission
+Improving
+Proving his superiority
+Outsmarting people
+Not being detected
+Knives
+Being alone (although, he will learn to work together and etc. the more he is exposed to his squad.)
+Sour foods
+Cold weather
+Organisation

Dislikes:
-Arrogant people
-People who value emotion over logic
-Those who do not respect his opinions
-Sweet foods
-Chocolate
-Hot weather
-Failure
-Messes

Strengths:
+Very fast in terms of running speed
+Adept at climbing, sneaking/stealth and anything that would make sense for a stealthy character
+Great aim with smaller weapons E.g. pistols and very light Smgs

Weaknesses:
-Terrible at teamwork
-Not too strong. So he cannot carry too much weight without hampering his movement and prefers not to use weapons that have too much recoil
-Failing important things really affects him negatively emotionally. Meaning that if he fails at fulfilling his role a few times in a row, he will just start getting worse and worse due to his confidence getting destroyed, regardless of the outcome of the mission.

Extras:
His Codename is "Voronoy".
Since all of his information is kept secret by his organisation, this is how he will be identified unless he gives his real name out.
He has a vast collection of knives, ranging from simple flip knives to his favourite, balisongs (some know them as butterfly knives). He knows how to use all of them, some better than others.
His emblem in the organisation:

Interest check

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Appearance(Image required.):

Name:​

David Thomas​

Age:
25
Selected Role:​

Breacher​

Gender:​

Male​

Height:​

6' 2"​

Weight:​

189​

Sexual Orientation:​

Straight​

Country of origin:​

England​

Backstory:
David was raised in an English castle. He was raised to be proper and stern. His mother was adamant he acted like his father, a wise noble man. David thought otherwise. He wanted to be a knight, strong and true, loyal and courteous. He snuck out everyday and began training with weapons of all kinds. His favorite weapon became a heavy Sledge hammer. Over time he gained much strength by lifting this hammer. When he became of 20 years of age, David set out on a personal journey, seeking adventure. When he hears of the rebels who sought to take away the peace, David was astonished. He signed up immediately to join the special task force.​

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Personality:​

If the situation calls for it, David will crack a joke. He usually is a man of discipline and skill. He accepts challenges as if it were a glass of water. David is a caring man, wanting to help everyone, friend and foe

He is usually seen as a strong and devoted leader, taking on many challenges. He has a work hard attitude and will attain anything by doing so. He won't give up, even if it means his immensely demise. A victory is worth more than a defeat and slaughter of the many.​

Likes:​

A good story
History
A good battle​

Dislikes:​

Wars
Rebels
Alligators​

Strengths:​

Physical strength
A careful demeanor​

Weaknesses:​

Legs
Quick, sharp attacks​

Extras:
Loves to tell stories to young people.​

You seem to have misunderstood. First off, your character seems a bit medieval, this is modern, as the interest check said 2039.
Then, one does not simply apply for the Schattenklingen. Your character is English meaning he most likely served in the SAS.

Also, he is supposed to be a very good special operative, but should not be too experienced in their new special role.

 

[The_Omega_Effect]

_Exodus_

You seem to have misunderstood. First off, your character seems a bit medieval, this is modern, as the interest check said 2039.
Then, one does not simply apply for the Schattenklingen. Your character is English meaning he most likely served in the SAS.

Also, he is supposed to be a very good special operative, but should not be too experienced in their new special role.

I do agree that it is a bit too medieval. Unless, you want your guy to just charge in with heavy bullet proof armour and his hammer which I admit would be very interesting. I think you should just add a bit of modern stuff to your character, add a tiny detail of how he joined the SAS and was selected to join "Die Schattenklauen", and you should be okay.

 

[The_Omega_Effect]

Appearance(Image required.):
Below
Name:
David "Dave" Banner
Age (Has to be more than 23 but no older than 37):
31
Selected Role:
Technician
Gender:
Male
Height:
6'1"
Weight:
176 lbs
Sexual Orientation:
Straight
Country of origin(Name along with flag if possible):
Australia
Backstory (Could be revealed in the RP or not revealed at all):
TBA in rp
Personality:
Snarky, sarcastic, analytical. Not a care in the world
Likes:
Getting under people's skin, knowing people's secrets, tinkering with machines and computers
Dislikes:
Criticism, bees, being outside, being told what to do
Strengths:
A tactical and mechanical genius. Can arrange a auto turret in under thirty seconds. A marksman with a pistol and expert freerunner to get to tactical locations for turret set ups and hacking
Weaknesses:
His own ego, lack of respect
Extras:

+Genius Tactics
+Genius mechanics
+Knows how to make a turret in 30 seconds
+Incredible aim with the pistol
+Expert freerunner/ extremely fast runner
+Knows how to hack well.
-his ego
-lack of respect

He definitely falls under the overpowered category.

First off, your character is not supposed to be a mechanical/electrical genius right off the bat. He is supposed to grow into one as he trains. He should only be like adept at it when he starts.

An auto turret? I mean the point of Tech is not to give firepower, it is to give utility in forms of him hacking things and etc. so that the firepower can work better. Definitely no.

"Lack of respect" is no weakness while "his own ego" is not even a good one to begin with. These definitely contribute to your character being overpowered.

You can have the aim with the pistol but if you want the free running one, or the genius tactics one, you should add more detrimental weaknesses. You should also take into account that your character is going to be carrying quite a bit of electrical and mechanical equipment, slowing him down.

 

[_Exodus_]

That was the idea, I just never got around to it.

 

[The_Omega_Effect]

That was the idea, I just never got around to it.

Alright then. Just add in the sas part and you are good to go. And I think that him learning to use explosives and other breacher things will be a big part of his training.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Appearance:

Name: Jessica Mayweather

Age: 27

Selected Role: Sniper

Gender: Female

Height: 174cm

Weight: 52kg

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Country of origin: Canada

Backstory: tbr during the rp
(Served in the army and later for the JTF2)

Personality:
While during operations, Jessica is very calm, collected and seems very objective, she can be very caring and kind when in free time. It appears as if she could switch emotions on and off. When working or concentrating on something, she focusses on just that and is very very determined. That makes her very limited however, as she oftenly is too focussed on one idea to see the ways around it. That oftenly gets her stuck, if her idea turns out to be a dead end.

On the other hand, Jessica is a person you can talk with very well. If you need somebody to talk to, if you feel bad, if you feel lonely, it doesn't matter. Jessica is there. The sniper will always try to help her teammates and establish a big family. However, other than you might think, even though she always listens to everyone and tries to help, it is very difficult for her to become close enough to somebody, that she might tell her problems and fears.

On a side note, Jessica has a terrible sweet tooth, you can't leave any sweet things near her, they'll be gone in no time.

Likes:
Dogs
Sweets
Good relationships

Dislikes:
Loners
Fire
Bitter Food

Strengths:
Able to keep calm in stressful situations
Very observant/attentive
A very good cook (not too useful in operations, but for everyday life)

Weaknesses:
Oftenly struggles to think outside the box.
While she is as strong and fast and endurable as needed for her work, she is far behind most other members.

Extras:
Code Name "SnowOwl"
Since her first hour of service in Canada, she has a companion that never leaves her side. He saved her and she saved him a few times already. His name is Buddy and he is a Husky. He is a trained military dog.

 

[Steve Freeling]

Appearance:

Name: Steve Freeling

Age: 37

Selected Role: Leader

Gender: Male

Height: 6' 3½" (1.92 m)

Weight: 181 lbs.

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Dark Brown

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Country of origin: United States

Backstory: To Be Revealed

Personality: Steve is friendly and believes in treating others fairly. He is generally calm, even when scared or angry unless you push him over the edge. He has a sarcastic streak. He can be persuasive and/or intimidating should the situation call for it.

Likes:
His kids
'80s and '90s movies
Dogs
Those who are Trustworthy
Beer

Dislikes:
Liars
Abusers
Backstabbers
Cheaters
Cowards
Snakes
Insects
Bigotry

Strengths:
Ambidextrous (aside from writing; he's only good at that in his right)
Expert Swimmer

Weaknesses:
Leadership is not his strong suit. He has moments where he's either too willing to cave or too bossy. It's certainly something he needs to work on.
He suffers from Ophidiophobia, an intense fear of snakes.

Extras:
His Emblem in the Organisation:

 

[The_Omega_Effect]

Steve Freeling Alright. I will write the Leader role as taken in the interest check thread then.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Steve Freeling Alright. I will write the Leader role as taken in the interest check thread then.

Can you create and edit in the US flag with the Symbol? As thread creator you should be able to edit his post.

 

[The_Omega_Effect]

Can you create and edit in the US flag with the Symbol? As thread creator you should be able to edit his post.

I'll create it as soon as I get the time.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

I'll create it as soon as I get the time.

Wonderful, thank you. Take your time.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Appearance(Image required.):
Below
Name:
David "Dave" Banner
Age (Has to be more than 23 but no older than 37):
31
Selected Role:
Technician
Gender:
Male
Height:
6'1"
Weight:
176 lbs
Sexual Orientation:
Straight
Country of origin(Name along with flag if possible):
Australia
Backstory (Could be revealed in the RP or not revealed at all):
TBA in rp
Personality:
Snarky, sarcastic, analytical. Not a care in the world
Likes:
Getting under people's skin, knowing people's secrets, tinkering with machines and computers
Dislikes:
Criticism, bees, being outside, being told what to do
Strengths:
A tactical and mechanical genius. Can arrange a auto turret in under thirty seconds. A marksman with a pistol and expert freerunner to get to tactical locations for turret set ups and hacking
Weaknesses:
His own ego, lack of respect
Extras:

Since we want to Start soon, i must ask you to either give a statement to how you intend to change the character with the things Omega said. Otherwise I must take it that you are no longer interested.

 

[The_Omega_Effect]

Appearance(Image required.):

Armor:

Name:
David Thomas
Age:
25
Selected Role:
Breacher
Gender:
Male
Height:
6' 2"
Weight:
189
Sexual Orientation:
Straight
Country of origin:
England
Backstory:
David was raised in an English castle. He was raised to be proper and stern. His mother was adamant he acted like his father, a wise noble man. David thought otherwise. He wanted to be a knight, strong and true, loyal and courteous. He snuck out everyday and began training with weapons of all kinds. His favorite weapon became a heavy Sledge hammer. Over time he gained much strength by lifting this hammer. When he became of 20 years of age, David set out on a personal journey, seeking adventure. When he hears of the rebels who sought to take away the peace, David was astonished. He signed up immediately to join the special task force.
Learning new ways of fighting alongside new technology. He exchanged his knights armor for a tactical suit.

Personality:
If the situation calls for it, David will crack a joke. He usually is a man of discipline and skill. He accepts challenges as if it were a glass of water. David is a caring man, wanting to help everyone, friend and foe

He is usually seen as a strong and devoted leader, taking on many challenges. He has a work hard attitude and will attain anything by doing so. He won't give up, even if it means his immensely demise. A victory is worth more than a defeat and slaughter of the many.
Likes:
A good story
History
A good battle
Dislikes:
Wars
Rebels
Alligators
Strengths:
Physical strength
A careful demeanor
Weaknesses:
Legs
Quick, sharp attacks
Extras:
Loves to tell stories to young people.​

Alright, you are in. I will now mark Breacher as taken. I will also try to see if I can create an english flag with the symbol for him to wear.

 

[_Exodus_]

Okay, thank you.

 

[Saavedra]

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Name: Linda Cortez

Age: 29

Selected Role: Medic

Gender: Female

Height: 1´68 m / 5´5

Weight: 78 kg / 181 lb

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Country of origin: United States of America

Backstory: Born in Texas. Mexican ascentry. Enrolled in US Navy. Served as Hospital Corpsman embedded in the USMC. Deployed to the Middle East. Suffered wounds in combat during Operation Green Peak. Decorated with: Navy Cross, Purple Heart Medal, Combat Action Ribbon, Navy Good Conduct Medal, Navy Expert Pistol Shot Medal, Global War on Terrorism Service Medal. Honorably discharged. Worked a brief stint as a concealed carry self-defence instructor until scouted for Die Schattenklauen.

Personality: Cortez is a well-adjusted individual. A disciplined professional on the job who does not settle for doing the bare minimum, and a human being with an ear open to anyone´s troubles. The first impression she gives out tends to be one of restrained intensity, which is just as well given she enjoys physical exercise (outdoors as well as indoors) and will naturally get on well with like-minded individuals.

She feels comfortable in a military setting, though those that know her better theorize that Cortez did not get out mentally unscathed. She has been considered melancholic and absent-minded at times, but no official diagnosis has been made as to whether she may be suffering from PTSD or other likely disorders.

Cortez looks with pride upon her military service as a Corpsman in the Marines, and considers herself more of a grunt than a hi-speed low-drag operator. She does not look down on them, but considers normal people in extraordinary circumstances more worthy of praise than specially trained soldiers... and yes, she is aware of the irony.


Likes:
Pistol shooting both leisure and competitive
Physical exercise
Military and historical literature
Driving around
Belonging

Dislikes:
Rudeness
Arrogance
Incompetence
Bad-mouthing Marines (fastest way to get in her shit-list)
Heroics
Nosing into people´s problems (both herself, and others doing this, particularly when it comes to medical problems)
Being reminded of when she appeared in TV (was a brief national sensation when she was decorated)

Strengths:
Absolute fearlessness (helps with trauma care in combat)
Expert in CQC and all it entails (close quarters marksmanship, quick reflexes, tactical analysis, entry point selection and urban navigation)
Positively deadly pistol shot (two-handed, one-handed, off-handed, multi-tasking)

Weaknesses:
Is quick to lose respect for some people (check dislikes), becoming passively condescending and distant towards them
Will put the lives of civilians above her teammates´ and her own without batting an eye (not to stupid extents, but some will not appreciate even that)
There is still something wrong with her wounds...


Extras:

Cortez co-authored a book about concealed carry for women that became popular due to her limited fame as a war heroine. It is actually a good book, though, so she doesn´t feel bad about that.

Even though she likes driving, she is completely useless at car repairs. Can you guess how that may be a problem in Texas?

 

[The_Omega_Effect]

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Name: Linda Cortez

Age: 29

Selected Role: Medic

Gender: Female

Height: 1´68 m / 5´5

Weight: 78 kg / 181 lb

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Country of origin: United States of America

Backstory: Born in Texas. Mexican ascentry. Enrolled in US Navy. Served as Hospital Corpsman embedded in the USMC. Deployed to the Middle East. Suffered wounds in combat during Operation Green Peak. Decorated with: Navy Cross, Purple Heart Medal, Combat Action Ribbon, Navy Good Conduct Medal, Navy Expert Pistol Shot Medal, Global War on Terrorism Service Medal. Honorably discharged. Worked a brief stint as a concealed carry self-defence instructor until scouted for Die Schattenklauen.

Personality: Cortez is a well-adjusted individual. A disciplined professional on the job who does not settle for doing the bare minimum, and a human being with an ear open to anyone´s troubles. The first impression she gives out tends to be one of restrained intensity, which is just as well given she enjoys physical exercise (outdoors as well as indoors) and will naturally get on well with like-minded individuals.

She feels comfortable in a military setting, though those that know her better theorize that Cortez did not get out mentally unscathed. She has been considered melancholic and absent-minded at times, but no official diagnosis has been made as to whether she may be suffering from PTSD or other likely disorders.

Cortez looks with pride upon her military service as a Corpsman in the Marines, and considers herself more of a grunt than a hi-speed low-drag operator. She does not look down on them, but considers normal people in extraordinary circumstances more worthy of praise than specially trained soldiers... and yes, she is aware of the irony.


Likes:
Pistol shooting both leisure and competitive
Physical exercise
Military and historical literature
Driving around
Belonging

Dislikes:
Rudeness
Arrogance
Incompetence
Bad-mouthing Marines (fastest way to get in her shit-list)
Heroics
Nosing into people´s problems (both herself, and others doing this, particularly when it comes to medical problems)
Being reminded of when she appeared in TV (was a brief national sensation when she was decorated)

Strengths:
Absolute fearlessness (helps with trauma care in combat)
Expert in CQC and all it entails (close quarters marksmanship, quick reflexes, tactical analysis, entry point selection and urban navigation)
Positively deadly pistol shot (two-handed, one-handed, off-handed, multi-tasking)

Weaknesses:
Is quick to lose respect for some people (check dislikes), becoming passively condescending and distant towards them
Will put the lives of civilians above her teammates´ and her own without batting an eye (not to stupid extents, but some will not appreciate even that)
There is still something wrong with her wounds...


Extras:

Cortez co-authored a book about concealed carry for women that became popular due to her limited fame as a war heroine. It is actually a good book, though, so she doesn´t feel bad about that.

Even though she likes driving, she is completely useless at car repairs. Can you guess how that may be a problem in Texas?

Sorry for the long wait time. Your CS looks good to me. I am guessing you will be expanding on that wound weakness in the Rp which I find acceptable. I will now mark Medic as taken, with Technician being the only available role left. You can just start Rping now.