actuallysweet
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Hello everyone!! 
I'm very happy to announce that I've written a proper, fully fledged short story all on my own for the first time in my life! It's about 8-9k words long, and as the title says, has the themes of a detective story, plays in kyoto, japan, and deals with a character who is falsely accused of crime!
I'd be so happy if anyone would give this a read and give me some feedback! However short, long, critical, or "useless" you might think it is — I'll take it! There's also commenting rights enabled on this document, so go ahead and highlight and leave whatever comments you'd like! I really just wanna share this with and show it to people
Just a heads up, while I did have a lot of fun crafting the plot of this, I am a character-focused writer! Hopefully those that know what I mean by that are interested now — and the ones that don't are curious
Below the link to the Google Doc!
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SYNOPSIS:
After a particularly taxing case, Junior Detective Murakami returns to his hometown in Japan. Although he's meant to be taking a break, a new case is sprung on him without him having a say in it — and suddenly, he finds himself investigating an orphan child who *swears* that he's been falsely accused of a crime.
I'm very happy to announce that I've written a proper, fully fledged short story all on my own for the first time in my life! It's about 8-9k words long, and as the title says, has the themes of a detective story, plays in kyoto, japan, and deals with a character who is falsely accused of crime!
I'd be so happy if anyone would give this a read and give me some feedback! However short, long, critical, or "useless" you might think it is — I'll take it! There's also commenting rights enabled on this document, so go ahead and highlight and leave whatever comments you'd like! I really just wanna share this with and show it to people
Just a heads up, while I did have a lot of fun crafting the plot of this, I am a character-focused writer! Hopefully those that know what I mean by that are interested now — and the ones that don't are curious
Below the link to the Google Doc!
ヌギレヌ
CHAPTER 1 A knock on the door. Koushi’s fingers stillened over the piano tiles. He looked over curiously; silently. A moment later, the door opened. It didn’t swing open like it did when the police officers arrived, nor did it burst open like it had when the orphanage caregivers came to acc...
SYNOPSIS:
After a particularly taxing case, Junior Detective Murakami returns to his hometown in Japan. Although he's meant to be taking a break, a new case is sprung on him without him having a say in it — and suddenly, he finds himself investigating an orphan child who *swears* that he's been falsely accused of a crime.
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