Fantasy Dark World reboot OOC

[Clockwork Syringe]

I'll mention him following I bring along him and Kaia (I think its okay for me to do that for her).

Thank you!

*also Jackson has Vira's sword on his back so that when he puts his coat back on, (if he ever does) it would be hidden from prying eyes*

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Just another lore question that i should have asked before typing out all of this backstory.
What is the Mojave desert like in New America?
Is it more or less the same but more apocalyptic?

yes
maybe mad maxy.. ;P

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Thank you!

*also Jackson has Vira's sword on his back so that when he puts his coat back on, (if he ever does) it would be hidden from prying eyes*

iduno if you can hide a sword with the jacket?

 

[King Crimson]

yes
maybe mad maxy.. ;P

Perfect.
That falls in line exactly with what I'm writing.

 

[Clockwork Syringe]

iduno if you can hide a sword with the jacket?

He can try! Besides when he sees Vira he will give it back if the situation calls for it.

 

[Thalia_Neko]

He can try! Besides when he sees Vira he will give it back if the situation calls for it.

true! :3 she wants her sword! XD and ( needs it btw ) lolz

Perfect.
That falls in line exactly with what I'm writing.

oo that sounds exciting!

 

[Syphe]

So I finally caught up and there were some quotes I found to be great.

Together the two rushed along, their bare feet softly plodding on the carpet. Vira shook her head thinking, 'Idiot

Shoulda been a red carpet haha

"Well fuck."

Me when I found out that there were 3 pages of OOC and alot of plot advancement to read

. A knife? Absolutely not! He'd hurt himself before hitting his target, undoubtedly. A rolling pin? Far too dull, and too hard to get a grip on. A handheld meat tenderizer?

Why not a frying pan? Don't you know frying pans are the tools of mass destruction?

hand came up catching the meat tenderizer out of the air by its handle.

That was just badass.

While she waited for a response, the sheet draped around her slid right off. With her unwavering, cold gaze still locked onto him, she bent down at the knee, and pulled it back up with one hand.

Hahaha, she just stares at him while trying to not-so-subtley cover herself up!

 

[Not Calm]

I should probably express that I'm not really proud of the situation I put Vira and Kotiro into. It's definitely awkward, and not a good example of my writing whatsoever. Hopefully it's somewhat decent to read, at least~ And hopefully awkward encounters don't become a theme with this character lmao.

 

[Iamthemanfish]

I should probably express that I'm not really proud of the situation I put Vira and Kotiro into. It's definitely awkward, and not a good example of my writing whatsoever. Hopefully it's somewhat decent to read, at least~ And hopefully awkward encounters don't become a theme with this character lmao.

Dude I like your character already it's a great read haha

 

[Thalia_Neko]

So I finally caught up and there were some quotes I found to be great.


Shoulda been a red carpet haha



Me when I found out that there were 3 pages of OOC and alot of plot advancement to read



Why not a frying pan? Don't you know frying pans are the tools of mass destruction?



That was just badass.



Hahaha, she just stares at him while trying to not-so-subtley cover herself up!

you know! - i considered making it red! XD lmao darn shouldve

LOL naturally!

of course! i expected a frying pan too!

YAY! glad someone else caught that! ^w^ thanks syphe! lol

LMAO yay again! glad someone else caught that again! XD

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Dude I like your character already it's a great read haha

indeed! i agree! :>

 

[FrostFire]

Last post before I sleep~ ^^

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Last post before I sleep~ ^^

okie hunny, gnite! :3

 

[littleberry]

oh cmon
that was a COMMENTABLE post XD
no comments??
cmon lolz

Baby girl, you make so many amazing posts. Awesome amazing posts. But you make all the plot twists and reveals and want us all to talk about it but my mind is so blown by it all I can't even talk about it because I am trying to just comprehend it all and idek like aaaagghhhhh

 

[Syphe]

I posted, hopefully helps out Clockwork and Tyra catch up. I feel like I may have left someone hanging -- Im gonna edit my post again lol

 

[littleberry]

aaaaghhhh there are so many posts 0.0

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Baby girl, you make so many amazing posts. Awesome amazing posts. But you make all the plot twists and reveals and want us all to talk about it but my mind is so blown by it all I can't even talk about it because I am trying to just comprehend it all and idek like aaaagghhhhh

baby girl i know, i understand! and thank you! ^w^ youre so kind! but yuh, i like people talking about the twists and reveals! *giggle* i know it takes a bit to parse! (and ohhh boy what ive got planned.. lolz)

but i was talking about the cute little scene with Vira playing with the man!
no comments on its :<

 

[Syphe]

aaaaghhhh there are so many posts 0.0

VVVVVV

Well fuck

 

[King Crimson]

Boom.

Hopefully I did your setting justice.

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Boom.

Hopefully I did your setting justice.

hehe
well i can deff say, shes Vira lmao

except Vira isnt afraid of talking like shit to Ellie lol
ohhh Vira hates smoking lol

this char is touching upon something i wouldve introduced eventually lol XD but its all good :3

it looks ultimately good to me! :3 phew, its refreshing to not have a ton wrong with a bio XD
well not a ton ton, but like, you get it lol
yea it did it justice! :3

though stipulation, if you make another char, they cant have a physical abnormality
since those are supposed to be rare

tho i am partial to the idea theyre a bit more common in an outland-like wasteland like the irradiated desert hm..!

 

[King Crimson]

well i can deff say, shes Vira lmao

Oof.
Hopefully I'll be able to make it so there isn't too much overlap between the two.

Who knows, maybe Jeanne will end being a nice foil to Vira?

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Oof.
Hopefully I'll be able to make it so there isn't too much overlap between the two.

Who knows, maybe Jeanne will end being a nice foil to Vira?

foil? how so??

 

[littleberry]

Wifey posted three times in three hours 0.0... And they were all long awesome posts!!

I'll never be on her level Dx

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Wifey posted three times in three hours 0.0... And they were all long awesome posts!!

I'll never be on her level Dx

WHA???!?! IS THAT TRUE?? lolz (i didnt even realized XD)

you will, bebe, you are! wifeys post are long and awesome! :3

 

[Thalia_Neko]

I only saw two big posts? XP