Chiyo
Blue Mermaid
Well I'm gonna try my hand at story writing again and see if I can continue this one. Mind you this is all off the top of my head and I was watching a movie when I came up with this, so be gentle.
New Home
The sun was high the crowd was loud. Some women, mostly men came to buy and sell whatever they could. "Step right up and be the first to purchase one of the servant girls!" a man shouted as he started to draw in a crowd, he stepped back to let his men bring out five young girls from a covered wagon, all of different race an color while the rest of the scared girls stayed in the wagon. They listened as the people outside started making bids on the girls they had only known a few days, the girl inside the wagon prayed that they would be bought to a good home, others like the two sisters only hoped to stay together if they were bought off and then there's this one girl; she had short white hair chocolate skin that was almost covered in bruises and haunting blue eyes, that's me. My name is Chiyo; I was given away by my adopted asian father because he needed the money to take care of my mother who was sick and dying. Even though I was his only daughter, he really had no other choice.
I had been passed off from house to house, village after village and even an Okia but no one wanted me because I was too quiet and I took every beating that was given to me and now I'm here again ready to be sold to some other house that will treat me like I'm nothing. I had gotten use to the routine whenever I was sold off, they would always leave me with the last few girls and put a sack over my head when I was brought out but this time I was told to stay in the wagon, somehow not very many people wanted servant girls in the last town but as we traveled to the next town we started to hear different sounds. "Where are we?" one girl asked, another answered, "I'm not sure but it sounds busy." I just rolled my eyes and gently touched my right leg, it had been broken at the last house I was living in as punishment for not doing something I was told. The wagon came to a halt and the men that where in the back with us jumped out an quickly set up the stage. Our seller started to draw in the crowd as some of the girls started to get nervous, I just sighed and prepared to stand up when the sheet of the wagon opened up, one of the men that sat with us helped me stand as the other girls got in line. “Same old thing Chiyo, good thing your face is looking better.” he said as he held up a brown sack, “Yeah I know.” I said quietly as I continued to look at the floor as the sack was placed over my head and I was lead out to the stage.
The noise from the crowd hurt my ears a little but I had gotten use to it, I could hear some of the other girls crying as bids started flying. I was glad to hear that the two sisters were bought together before I came out but then I heard the sick question I never wanted to hear, “What’s with the girl under the sack, she ugly or something?” the crowd laughed and agree, I knew it had to be said but I kept my head down and stood my ground as the sack was taken off my head, everyone was silent when they saw what I looked like then my sellers voice came up. “This little lady is one of a kind, with cocoa skin and snow white hair no one wanted to keep her because she took what was given to her.” he said as he gently guided me to the front of the stage, I limped a few feet with his help and stood there with my eyes closed. The boss started the bids at a 400 yen that was at least 250 in American dollars, the highest he’s ever started on me, some of the men started to mumble why I wouldn’t open my eyes and I guess my boss heard them an whispered in my ear. “Show them why.” I took a deep breath and slowly let it out as I slowly opened my eyes.
Suddenly numbers were being shouted out left and right, I fought the urge to turn away but I held firm when the boss tried to keep up with bids as the other girls were bought off quickly, all that was left was me. Things started to get crazy until someone rang a bell, I tried to look around to see where it came from without being noticed until a young man came up to the front of the crowd and held up a wad of money, “By order of the Emperor, he pays 10 million yen for this woman!” he shouted, the crowd fell silent, I stumbled a bit against my boss and looked up at him, he gave me a ‘good luck’ look an a small grin then shouted to the crowd. “SOLD!"
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New Home
The sun was high the crowd was loud. Some women, mostly men came to buy and sell whatever they could. "Step right up and be the first to purchase one of the servant girls!" a man shouted as he started to draw in a crowd, he stepped back to let his men bring out five young girls from a covered wagon, all of different race an color while the rest of the scared girls stayed in the wagon. They listened as the people outside started making bids on the girls they had only known a few days, the girl inside the wagon prayed that they would be bought to a good home, others like the two sisters only hoped to stay together if they were bought off and then there's this one girl; she had short white hair chocolate skin that was almost covered in bruises and haunting blue eyes, that's me. My name is Chiyo; I was given away by my adopted asian father because he needed the money to take care of my mother who was sick and dying. Even though I was his only daughter, he really had no other choice.
I had been passed off from house to house, village after village and even an Okia but no one wanted me because I was too quiet and I took every beating that was given to me and now I'm here again ready to be sold to some other house that will treat me like I'm nothing. I had gotten use to the routine whenever I was sold off, they would always leave me with the last few girls and put a sack over my head when I was brought out but this time I was told to stay in the wagon, somehow not very many people wanted servant girls in the last town but as we traveled to the next town we started to hear different sounds. "Where are we?" one girl asked, another answered, "I'm not sure but it sounds busy." I just rolled my eyes and gently touched my right leg, it had been broken at the last house I was living in as punishment for not doing something I was told. The wagon came to a halt and the men that where in the back with us jumped out an quickly set up the stage. Our seller started to draw in the crowd as some of the girls started to get nervous, I just sighed and prepared to stand up when the sheet of the wagon opened up, one of the men that sat with us helped me stand as the other girls got in line. “Same old thing Chiyo, good thing your face is looking better.” he said as he held up a brown sack, “Yeah I know.” I said quietly as I continued to look at the floor as the sack was placed over my head and I was lead out to the stage.
The noise from the crowd hurt my ears a little but I had gotten use to it, I could hear some of the other girls crying as bids started flying. I was glad to hear that the two sisters were bought together before I came out but then I heard the sick question I never wanted to hear, “What’s with the girl under the sack, she ugly or something?” the crowd laughed and agree, I knew it had to be said but I kept my head down and stood my ground as the sack was taken off my head, everyone was silent when they saw what I looked like then my sellers voice came up. “This little lady is one of a kind, with cocoa skin and snow white hair no one wanted to keep her because she took what was given to her.” he said as he gently guided me to the front of the stage, I limped a few feet with his help and stood there with my eyes closed. The boss started the bids at a 400 yen that was at least 250 in American dollars, the highest he’s ever started on me, some of the men started to mumble why I wouldn’t open my eyes and I guess my boss heard them an whispered in my ear. “Show them why.” I took a deep breath and slowly let it out as I slowly opened my eyes.
Suddenly numbers were being shouted out left and right, I fought the urge to turn away but I held firm when the boss tried to keep up with bids as the other girls were bought off quickly, all that was left was me. Things started to get crazy until someone rang a bell, I tried to look around to see where it came from without being noticed until a young man came up to the front of the crowd and held up a wad of money, “By order of the Emperor, he pays 10 million yen for this woman!” he shouted, the crowd fell silent, I stumbled a bit against my boss and looked up at him, he gave me a ‘good luck’ look an a small grin then shouted to the crowd. “SOLD!"