Chronicles of Rin Yuan [ Feedback welcome! ]

Zaramis

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Hello everyone! This is my first post on these boards. I found my way here because I'm interested in portraiting as detailed and complex Exalted world as possible for my campaign, the Chronicles of Rin Yuan.


If any of my players read here ( Ikeda, Ryoichi, Otaru, Ichi-Tori or Kyochi ), then STOP IMMEDIATLY. Yes. RIGHT NOW: If you read this, you didn't stop soon enough!


Anyway, for all you others, I thought I'd introduce myself to these boards by giving you the summary of my campaign, as it's written in the InDesign'ed book I am putting together for the campaign. It's mostly done, and is much more complex than it appears here, but I thought It would be too much to post everything, so I start with a little teaser. My plan is to publish the completed campaign on the internet for anyone to use, it is designed sort-of like an Exalted book. If any storytellers like it or want to use any part of it, feel free, but I'd love to hear about any ideas that came from this, hehe ^_^


If you like it, or have any opinions or questions, I'd love to hear them. The campaign is largely thought out, but Im sure that you guys have thoughts and opinions that can change it to be even better.


Here it is:


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Introduction:


The Chronicles of Rin-Yuan is a complete campaign for a group of newly graduated Dragon-Blooded exalted, spinning around the fate of Rin-Yuan, a prefecture on the blessed isle. The story itself is quite open-ended, although there is a timeline that the story will follow, with respective events occuring at their set times ( unless someone radically changes the pace of the story, of course ).


How To Use This Book:


The book is divided into five chapters, the first beeing this introduction.


The Succession of Karu:


The succession of Karu tells a story of a recently deceased Dynast, Ragara Karu, and the remains of his wealthy empire in the city of Rin-Yuan. The PC’s are sent out, together with several other Dragon-Blooded nobles, to recover what is left of the precious Dragon Silk-trade that Ragara Karu controlled and to seize power in the headless prefecture. Many other nobles stand in their way, each and every one struggling for the same goal, in more or less roundabout ways. Ragara Karu was obviously murdered, and an ancient decree set forth by the Empress dictates that the profit of the Dragon Silk trade as well as the ruling position of Rin Yuan belongs to the line of Ragara Maris, mother of Ragara Karu. As it is, Ragara Koji is the last remaining son officially belonging to the bloodline - if he passes away the matter will lie unresolved. Ragara Koji is also known as a worthless dynast, not worthy of the title - not even according to his own house! Several interested parties have sent their chosen to obstruct his rise to power. Some do it through assassination, some through providing a different claim on the throne, some through gentle manipulation and some through brute force. And at the same time, the mystery of Ragara Karu’s murder still lingers.. perhaps it was none of the houses, but something entirely different that was behind it? Some signs point to such a conclusion. But why?


Of Lost Treasures:


Just as the dust is settling, Rin-Yuan is struck by another catastrophe, one that can topple the city’s economy all together. There are no more ships coming in with Dragon-Silk and judging from the news, there won’t be any in the future either. According to a message from the patricians in Terek-Hun, the city in the Treshold from where the Dragon-Silk ships, the tiny larvae that produces the silk are all gone. The PC’s, or whoever controls Rin-Yuan, are not eager to see their newly aquired trade end up in nothing, and so, several groups are sent to Terek-Hun to investigate. Well there, the answer is all too clear – It’s a trap. Terek-Hun has been taken over by rebels, having seized control of all the important structures in the city without the Empire beeing notified, even once. The players and their allies have sailed into a trap, and their small forces face an army fortified in the city – a city with surprising amounts of fortifications, despite it being placed in a very calm region of the realm. Perhaps something is even more amiss? However, the urgency of the situation calls for action. It is up to the Player Characters and the other nobles to put their personal struggle aside to unite against the enemies of the Scarlet Empire and restore order to Terek-Hun.


Behind the Scenes:


Having restored order to Terek-Hun and hopefully established the Dragon-Silk trade again, there is still no evidence as to who started the rebellion in the first place. But, there are traces, traces that lead the characters through the slums and poor parts of Terek-Hun, where showing your true heritage is not the ideal solution. The path leads them to a large bathhouse where they are assaulted and attacked. If they survive and make it through the dungeon that is the bathhouse, they enter a study. Suddenly, appearing from a hidden compartment is a strange, tall man with milk-white skin. He offers them praise for finding him, and tells them that they must have realized that this is about something far grander than just a petty income from some trade route. He then, if they allow him, tells them a story about how he served Ragara Karu faithfully, and was promised a spot as Satrap for Terek Hun. But Ragara Karu betrayed him because the dynast was paranoid, despite his servant having served him completely faithfully. House Ragara sent assassins for him, since he could not live on with the knowledge of the horrible secret the Dragon Silk trade held – the fact that Terek Hun was being built up into a military fortification, ready to house the Ragara Legions for an upcoming succession war on the imperial island. The legions and the building projects were paid by the enormous excess wealth from the Dragon Silk trade. The conflict in Rin-Yuan made the Ragara officer there call a large force of the troops back, and <Name> took his chance to stop this before it was too late – both saving the empire and ruining Ragara in the same stroke. Now it’s up to the players if they want to help, or if he has to dispose of them.. Or that’s the story he tells them, at least.  In reality, he is something wildly different.. or is he?


End of Introduction


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Looks Good


The story looks realy good and I would really like to see it when you complete it.  I'm getting ready to run a DB game and really like the plot so far and would interested in using if you woldn't mind.  I think my players would really enjoy playing the campain and I could easliy incorperate it into my story once we get rolling.  Thanks
 
That sounds great :) I have a lot of material that I can post here, although it isn't 100% fleshed out, it is a breakdown of the major NPC's, and some planned events and such.


Ill post it tomorrow. It would be really cool to hear how someone else did the campaign, and I could post news how my own ongoing version is going.
 
Campain


That would great I would l;ove to hear how  your game is going and perhaps it would give me more ideas.  I'll keep you posted when I get my group running some time around the middle of Jan.  I had also had the idea of trying to pair up with some one running a Solar campain and have my DB's tracking them.  It would it interfer with there game but mine would follow them as the DB's tried to bring them to justice.
 
Here's a guide to the important NPC players ( not all of them, but most ) in the city. Some of them are more detailed with checklists, while others aren't just because I haven't gotten around to it. They dont really include their personalities and such, but I have personalities thought out for them. If I get to work later, I might add it.


** MAJOR NPC PLAYERS IN PART 1 - Succession of Karu **


House Ragara


Ragara Aki - The Bank of the empire have sent out an envoy to make sure that Karu’s legit successor, Koji, is not placed on the throne of Rin-Yuan. The envoy, Ragara Aki, intends to replace Koji with the natural choice, herself, by simply advising Koji that it is in his best interests. If needed, she has a substantial wealth that might be used to encourage him to go into hiding. However, she might be a bit careless with how she spends her aquired wealth - the House is not always pleased at the costs her missions require. If Koji does not willingly attest the ownership to her, she will simply wait for someone else to assassinate him, then see to the fact that the others are properly reinbursed for their troubles. However, as long as there is a chance that Koji might attest the ownership to Aki, she will try to keep him alive.


Ragara Aki is defined thusly:


• She has Resources 4, previously 5. These resources were gotten in the expedition she and Rigaru went on to the south, by selling slaves and artifacts. She is willing to spend quite a few of these in Rin-Yuan..


• She is favored by her house after her last trip to the south, but Banoba’s envoy is keeping his eyes on her in case she causes any trouble.


• She only has Cathak Rigaru as her bodyguard, but has Command 3 stationed outside the city, waiting to move in to secure the city or offer “protectionâ€
 
Now my homepage is updated with the session logs of the first two sessions:


http://www.zaramis.net


I hope to turn that page into a mini-community for my campaign, where people can keep themselves updated and such, if anyone is interested :)
 
Game


Cool I look forward to following your group.  It may be a little while before I get to running this as I have some new gamers and I want to run a couple of get familiar with the rules games first.  Just the basics like a wyld hunt, but then I plan on dumping them into the Political hot bed of Rin-Yuan.  I'll keep you posted, it should be a lot of fun.
 
I think we've played around 7 sessions now, although Im not sure. I will try and keep the homepage somewhat updated, although I have been known to be lazy so the updates might be late :P Like right now, they are.


Im really looking forward to hearing how it turns out in your campaign tho, there's nothing as flattering for a storyteller as when someon else gets inspiration or runs a game using his ideas :)
 

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