Ayl
The Tale Weaver
So, here's a lil' something I wrote recently. Mind you, it's not entirely done yet, need to add some bits here and there, but here's the uncut version. Feedback is welcomed ON ALL PIECES:
The bumping of the the rickety wheels reduced once the carriage found itself on the much smoother, paved road that led up to the mansion. The horses’ gait was slow, but steady. Afterall, a gallop on those tricky roads could’ve harmed them. The sun was slowly setting, leaving the horizon colored bloody. The wind was softly brushing against the opened petals of the flowers that were placed throughout the garden in such a manner that those following the road could admire their beauty.
Yet the many different types of roses and tulips didn’t attract Madelinne’s attention in the slightest, whereas once her gaze would’ve been all over them. It was clear that it has been a long time since her childhood.
Oh, how had the scenery changed!
Where once there were giant figures sculpted out of the living fence, there was nothing but withered roots. The giant oaken guardians that stood watch over the archway were now barren of their emerald leaves, their once strong arms now gathered around them, trying to ward off Death’s cold. The contrast between before and after 20 years of absence was quite shocking.
With her hands tucked nicely in her lap, the woman in the carriage took short glances at the scenery, noticing the changes. Though a bit taken aback, the effect of the apparently abandoned domain didn’t deter her as much as should have. Soon, the sound of the carman’s “Hooo there!” reached her ears, as she felt the carriage come to a stop.
Doing a quick brush-up on herself, she waited for the door to be opened and the driver to help her out. She didn’t have to wait much and soon she was outside, in the dying light of the evening. At first glance, the manor didn’t look much different, but as her eyes got adjusted to the dusk’s darkness, she could spot the missing tiles on the roof, the shriveled paint on the walls and the ominous atmosphere it would emit.
It was like all that was good in that place had packed its bags and left a long time ago, leaving only sorrow to wander its once grand halls. At least, that was Madelinne’s impression as she stepped through the towering doors, into the main hall. The chandelier above her head, which used to be adorned with glittering crystals, now stood almost naked, with only a few candles to enlighten the vicinity.
In the candlelight, the woman’s features became more prominent. Her alabaster skin seemed soft, despite her obviously aged features. She was no longer a young flower, yet her hazel eyes still reflected rays of youth. Her blonde, dyed hair completed the image of a woman who had changed with the passing of time.
Following the clicking of her heels against the wooden floor, a voice boomed from behind the a door which was slightly cracked open. “I thought I instructed you to wait outside!” it asked. Immediatly, the voice was followed by a rather hunched back man. This one was even older than the lady standing in the entrance hall. Despite his hair looking whiter than snow, he was quite agile in movement.
Spotting the intruder, the well-dressed gentleman swiftly adopted a much more appropriate tone. “Oh, excuse me, madame! I confused you with someone else, apparently.” he apologised. “My name is Radolph, butler of Lord and Lady Aussberg. Please excuse the-”
“It’s been quite a while, my dear Radolph. I sincerely hope you’ve missed me, because I’ve certainly missed you!” the woman spoke, her lips arching in a smile. At first, seemingly insulted by the rude intrerruption, the man’s eyes widdened at the sudden revelation.
“L-Lady Madelinne?! Is that you?!” he asked, incredulous.
As she approached him with arms spread, beckoning for a hug, she replied: “Yes, Radolph, it is I. Oh, my sweet Radolph, how have the years been in your favour!”. She gently brushed his white, yet rich moustache, about the only trace of evidence left that the man ever had any hair at all. “Oh, my Lady! I cannot believe it! How long has it been…”.
His eyes sparkled with held-back tears of joy. Grabbing her by the shoulders, he took a more attentive look at the girl-turned-woman he used to love and take care of. “My, my, how you’ve grown! You look stunningly alike your mother!”.
The sudden mention of her parent made the smile on her face fade away, which was more than enough to make the large man realise he had mispoken. “Oh, but where are my manners? Please, come in! Let me take your coat!”. Madelinne quickly complied, taking off her satin shawl and fur coat.
“Where is he?” she asked, her voice bearing nothing of the affection it manifested for the butler. With a rather sad look in his blue eyes, Radolph turned to her: “Upstairs, in the library. Allow me to-”
“Thank you, but I can manage on my own.”. As she turned to follow the path further into the mansion, she stopped. “How is he?” she inquired again. “Not well. It’s been very hard on him.” Radolph retorted with a tone betraying even more grief.
With another nod, the Lady started going up the staircase, her gentle hand resting against the railing. Following the crimson carpet, she reached the upper floor. A giggle escaped her mouth, as she recalled all the times she would play with her dolls, siblings and friends throughout the corridors.
Her memories of the manor still served her well, as she strode all the way to the double-doored entrance to the knowledge sanctuary that was the manor’s library. Without knocking, she entered the silent room. The flickering flames of the hearth was all that kept the shadows of the night at bay. Blocking the direct view of the fire was an armchair, from where the top of a person’s head could easily be distinguished.
Madelinne’s footsteps were muffled by the rugs spread over the floor, as she drew ever closer to the individual. “Father.” she called out. At first, the figure didn’t move, as if he had just woken from a dream and didn’t believe what he heard was true. Then, with slow gestures, he turned over the armrest, to gaze at the woman standing to his left. Unsurprised, he exclaimed: “Finally! Itt was about bloody time you got here!”. The cold greeting angered Madelinne, despite her not showing it. “I’m sorry I inconvenienced you, as usual.”. As if he hadn’t even heard her, Lord Aussberg reverted to his previous position. “You even missed the funeral. Did you really hate her that much as to not bother to be present, or did you have more than one sick mother to care for?”.
Her father’s words hurt her like a fiery knife, plunged deep in her chest. “Maybe I would’ve been here if she had not tried her best to alienate me!”. The old Lord huffed. “Alienate you? She desired naught but your happiness! How dare you speak such ill words?!”
“I would’ve been a tenfold more happy if she had bothered to speak to me, instead of paying so strangers to take care of me in her place. I would’ve been so much more content if, instead of attending balls and tea parties, she would’ve read me bedtime stories and told me how much she loved me. But no, I was to be married as soon as possible, to a man whom not only I did not love, but I could never love, whereas the man I truly loved was exiled for the sin of returning my love!”
Before she realised how she had reacted, tears were falling down her cheeks. Upon realising this, Madelinne quickly attempted to remove them, but was surprised by the soft texture of the cloth her father was now wiping her face with, a sorrowful smile on his face.
“Foolish child…” he mumbled. “You’ve grown into an adult, yet you still have the greediness of an infant. Wait here, I have something for you!”. With that, he left her for a few moments, as he went further into the darkness. In the corner of the room, there was an old study her father would often use to do his work on. Quickly extracting something from one of the drawers, he walked back to her, handling her a sealed envelope. “Here, this is for you! Read it carefully. We’ll talk then. I’ll go tell Radolph to prepare supper.”.
Leaving the room, the Lord left his daughter alone, with only the shadows and flames as companions. Sighing, she took a long glance at the object in her hand, wondering what could be inside that was so relevant. Occupying her father’s former seat, she used her long nails to open the seal, picking out a written piece of paper.
Taking her time, she unfolded the letter and started reading it, word by word. The words were written by hand, with a beautiful calligraphy, which she recognised to be her mother’s:
“To Madelinne, my beloved daughter,
If you are reading this, then I’m no longer alive. I don’t know how fast the news of my passing will reach you, seeing as you refuse to reply to my correspondence. However, I cannot blame you. Afterall, we did not part on the greatest of terms, a guilt I bear up until this very day. But believe me when I say that it is not guilt that pushes me to write you these lines, but love. Yes, you may find it hard to believe this, but I did love you.
I always did and I never did anything but seek your best. I wanted you to be happy, I wanted you to enjoy your life. It is clear to me now, on my deathbed, that I did not achieve that goal, seeing as you would not talk to me. Thus, I would want to apologise. I want to tell you how sorry I am for pushing you away from my side. Oh, how I see now the error of my judgement. It haunts me day and night, this I swear to you.
You were so beautiful that day, in your white wedding dress. A truly opposite image from the groom I had picked for you. Of course you must hate me for the decision I had to make, but what was I do to? Earl Hentington was a distinguished individual, despite his foul reputation. Only after so many years do I realise my mistake. It would have been better to allow you to marry your beloved, instead. For that, I am deeply sorry, my child.
But, I do wish to tell you this, before I am no longer able to. I never stopped thinking about you. Since the day of your wedding, the last time I saw you, I carried you in my thoughts day and night. Often would I find myself remembering the times I used to admire you from the mansion’s windows, how you would play in the gardens with your brother.
How your wonderful, raven hair would fly in the wind, how you constantly laughed and loved to dance in the rain. Oh, how cute you looked when you would come in, soaked from head to toe. It sometimes pained me to scold you for your misdeeds, for they were oh, so amusing.
Not a moment went by that I didn’t miss these things about you, my dear. And now, that my time draws near, my only regret is that I’ve never apologised to you for how I’ve behaved. But I still have hope! I still hope that you will come, with the wind, to see me. To forgive me. Oh, how wonderful a fantasy that is, isn’t it?
But worry not, my sweet. Your mother will always watch over you, from Heaven! Know only that I never stopped caring for you, no matter what, and I can only hope that one day, you will find it in yourself to forgive me.
With love, your mother!”
It took several minutes for her to read through the whole thing, in spite of the letter being short. Just as she was finishing the last sentence, her father walked back in.
“So?” he asked. “Still upset?”
Sobbing, struggling to keep her tears back, Madelinne couldn’t refrain from asking: “H-How did you know? The seal was untouched. H-How could you possibly know what it could say?”. Lord Aussberg kept silent at first, only to burst into a chuckle.
“Oh, child,” he said, as he approached her, gently placing a hand on her shoulder. “It was because I knew your mother better than anyone that I guessed what the letter could contain. But what is more important, is whether or not her words have had any effect.” he said, wisely.
Wiping further tears from her eyes, Madelinne smiled. “I guess you did know her best. I’m sorry, father, I-”
“Shh, it’s alright, child. I’m sure that, wherever she is, your mother knows.”. At his statement, the woman could only nod, more tears threatening to overcome her. Holding her hand, the old father pulled his daughter into an tight embrace. “I love my, my child.” he whispered.
With a laugh, Madelinne inquired: “How much more are you going to call me a child, father? I’m a grown woman, you know!”.
“Oh, I know, sweetheart, but to me, you’ll always be but a child.”. Contemplating it for a moment, Madelinne smiled as she hugged her father even tighter, finding in her the strength to speak the words she hadn’t said in so many years:
“I love you, daddy.”
Yet the many different types of roses and tulips didn’t attract Madelinne’s attention in the slightest, whereas once her gaze would’ve been all over them. It was clear that it has been a long time since her childhood.
Oh, how had the scenery changed!
Where once there were giant figures sculpted out of the living fence, there was nothing but withered roots. The giant oaken guardians that stood watch over the archway were now barren of their emerald leaves, their once strong arms now gathered around them, trying to ward off Death’s cold. The contrast between before and after 20 years of absence was quite shocking.
With her hands tucked nicely in her lap, the woman in the carriage took short glances at the scenery, noticing the changes. Though a bit taken aback, the effect of the apparently abandoned domain didn’t deter her as much as should have. Soon, the sound of the carman’s “Hooo there!” reached her ears, as she felt the carriage come to a stop.
Doing a quick brush-up on herself, she waited for the door to be opened and the driver to help her out. She didn’t have to wait much and soon she was outside, in the dying light of the evening. At first glance, the manor didn’t look much different, but as her eyes got adjusted to the dusk’s darkness, she could spot the missing tiles on the roof, the shriveled paint on the walls and the ominous atmosphere it would emit.
It was like all that was good in that place had packed its bags and left a long time ago, leaving only sorrow to wander its once grand halls. At least, that was Madelinne’s impression as she stepped through the towering doors, into the main hall. The chandelier above her head, which used to be adorned with glittering crystals, now stood almost naked, with only a few candles to enlighten the vicinity.
In the candlelight, the woman’s features became more prominent. Her alabaster skin seemed soft, despite her obviously aged features. She was no longer a young flower, yet her hazel eyes still reflected rays of youth. Her blonde, dyed hair completed the image of a woman who had changed with the passing of time.
Following the clicking of her heels against the wooden floor, a voice boomed from behind the a door which was slightly cracked open. “I thought I instructed you to wait outside!” it asked. Immediatly, the voice was followed by a rather hunched back man. This one was even older than the lady standing in the entrance hall. Despite his hair looking whiter than snow, he was quite agile in movement.
Spotting the intruder, the well-dressed gentleman swiftly adopted a much more appropriate tone. “Oh, excuse me, madame! I confused you with someone else, apparently.” he apologised. “My name is Radolph, butler of Lord and Lady Aussberg. Please excuse the-”
“It’s been quite a while, my dear Radolph. I sincerely hope you’ve missed me, because I’ve certainly missed you!” the woman spoke, her lips arching in a smile. At first, seemingly insulted by the rude intrerruption, the man’s eyes widdened at the sudden revelation.
“L-Lady Madelinne?! Is that you?!” he asked, incredulous.
As she approached him with arms spread, beckoning for a hug, she replied: “Yes, Radolph, it is I. Oh, my sweet Radolph, how have the years been in your favour!”. She gently brushed his white, yet rich moustache, about the only trace of evidence left that the man ever had any hair at all. “Oh, my Lady! I cannot believe it! How long has it been…”.
His eyes sparkled with held-back tears of joy. Grabbing her by the shoulders, he took a more attentive look at the girl-turned-woman he used to love and take care of. “My, my, how you’ve grown! You look stunningly alike your mother!”.
The sudden mention of her parent made the smile on her face fade away, which was more than enough to make the large man realise he had mispoken. “Oh, but where are my manners? Please, come in! Let me take your coat!”. Madelinne quickly complied, taking off her satin shawl and fur coat.
“Where is he?” she asked, her voice bearing nothing of the affection it manifested for the butler. With a rather sad look in his blue eyes, Radolph turned to her: “Upstairs, in the library. Allow me to-”
“Thank you, but I can manage on my own.”. As she turned to follow the path further into the mansion, she stopped. “How is he?” she inquired again. “Not well. It’s been very hard on him.” Radolph retorted with a tone betraying even more grief.
With another nod, the Lady started going up the staircase, her gentle hand resting against the railing. Following the crimson carpet, she reached the upper floor. A giggle escaped her mouth, as she recalled all the times she would play with her dolls, siblings and friends throughout the corridors.
Her memories of the manor still served her well, as she strode all the way to the double-doored entrance to the knowledge sanctuary that was the manor’s library. Without knocking, she entered the silent room. The flickering flames of the hearth was all that kept the shadows of the night at bay. Blocking the direct view of the fire was an armchair, from where the top of a person’s head could easily be distinguished.
Madelinne’s footsteps were muffled by the rugs spread over the floor, as she drew ever closer to the individual. “Father.” she called out. At first, the figure didn’t move, as if he had just woken from a dream and didn’t believe what he heard was true. Then, with slow gestures, he turned over the armrest, to gaze at the woman standing to his left. Unsurprised, he exclaimed: “Finally! Itt was about bloody time you got here!”. The cold greeting angered Madelinne, despite her not showing it. “I’m sorry I inconvenienced you, as usual.”. As if he hadn’t even heard her, Lord Aussberg reverted to his previous position. “You even missed the funeral. Did you really hate her that much as to not bother to be present, or did you have more than one sick mother to care for?”.
Her father’s words hurt her like a fiery knife, plunged deep in her chest. “Maybe I would’ve been here if she had not tried her best to alienate me!”. The old Lord huffed. “Alienate you? She desired naught but your happiness! How dare you speak such ill words?!”
“I would’ve been a tenfold more happy if she had bothered to speak to me, instead of paying so strangers to take care of me in her place. I would’ve been so much more content if, instead of attending balls and tea parties, she would’ve read me bedtime stories and told me how much she loved me. But no, I was to be married as soon as possible, to a man whom not only I did not love, but I could never love, whereas the man I truly loved was exiled for the sin of returning my love!”
Before she realised how she had reacted, tears were falling down her cheeks. Upon realising this, Madelinne quickly attempted to remove them, but was surprised by the soft texture of the cloth her father was now wiping her face with, a sorrowful smile on his face.
“Foolish child…” he mumbled. “You’ve grown into an adult, yet you still have the greediness of an infant. Wait here, I have something for you!”. With that, he left her for a few moments, as he went further into the darkness. In the corner of the room, there was an old study her father would often use to do his work on. Quickly extracting something from one of the drawers, he walked back to her, handling her a sealed envelope. “Here, this is for you! Read it carefully. We’ll talk then. I’ll go tell Radolph to prepare supper.”.
Leaving the room, the Lord left his daughter alone, with only the shadows and flames as companions. Sighing, she took a long glance at the object in her hand, wondering what could be inside that was so relevant. Occupying her father’s former seat, she used her long nails to open the seal, picking out a written piece of paper.
Taking her time, she unfolded the letter and started reading it, word by word. The words were written by hand, with a beautiful calligraphy, which she recognised to be her mother’s:
“To Madelinne, my beloved daughter,
If you are reading this, then I’m no longer alive. I don’t know how fast the news of my passing will reach you, seeing as you refuse to reply to my correspondence. However, I cannot blame you. Afterall, we did not part on the greatest of terms, a guilt I bear up until this very day. But believe me when I say that it is not guilt that pushes me to write you these lines, but love. Yes, you may find it hard to believe this, but I did love you.
I always did and I never did anything but seek your best. I wanted you to be happy, I wanted you to enjoy your life. It is clear to me now, on my deathbed, that I did not achieve that goal, seeing as you would not talk to me. Thus, I would want to apologise. I want to tell you how sorry I am for pushing you away from my side. Oh, how I see now the error of my judgement. It haunts me day and night, this I swear to you.
You were so beautiful that day, in your white wedding dress. A truly opposite image from the groom I had picked for you. Of course you must hate me for the decision I had to make, but what was I do to? Earl Hentington was a distinguished individual, despite his foul reputation. Only after so many years do I realise my mistake. It would have been better to allow you to marry your beloved, instead. For that, I am deeply sorry, my child.
But, I do wish to tell you this, before I am no longer able to. I never stopped thinking about you. Since the day of your wedding, the last time I saw you, I carried you in my thoughts day and night. Often would I find myself remembering the times I used to admire you from the mansion’s windows, how you would play in the gardens with your brother.
How your wonderful, raven hair would fly in the wind, how you constantly laughed and loved to dance in the rain. Oh, how cute you looked when you would come in, soaked from head to toe. It sometimes pained me to scold you for your misdeeds, for they were oh, so amusing.
Not a moment went by that I didn’t miss these things about you, my dear. And now, that my time draws near, my only regret is that I’ve never apologised to you for how I’ve behaved. But I still have hope! I still hope that you will come, with the wind, to see me. To forgive me. Oh, how wonderful a fantasy that is, isn’t it?
But worry not, my sweet. Your mother will always watch over you, from Heaven! Know only that I never stopped caring for you, no matter what, and I can only hope that one day, you will find it in yourself to forgive me.
With love, your mother!”
It took several minutes for her to read through the whole thing, in spite of the letter being short. Just as she was finishing the last sentence, her father walked back in.
“So?” he asked. “Still upset?”
Sobbing, struggling to keep her tears back, Madelinne couldn’t refrain from asking: “H-How did you know? The seal was untouched. H-How could you possibly know what it could say?”. Lord Aussberg kept silent at first, only to burst into a chuckle.
“Oh, child,” he said, as he approached her, gently placing a hand on her shoulder. “It was because I knew your mother better than anyone that I guessed what the letter could contain. But what is more important, is whether or not her words have had any effect.” he said, wisely.
Wiping further tears from her eyes, Madelinne smiled. “I guess you did know her best. I’m sorry, father, I-”
“Shh, it’s alright, child. I’m sure that, wherever she is, your mother knows.”. At his statement, the woman could only nod, more tears threatening to overcome her. Holding her hand, the old father pulled his daughter into an tight embrace. “I love my, my child.” he whispered.
With a laugh, Madelinne inquired: “How much more are you going to call me a child, father? I’m a grown woman, you know!”.
“Oh, I know, sweetheart, but to me, you’ll always be but a child.”. Contemplating it for a moment, Madelinne smiled as she hugged her father even tighter, finding in her the strength to speak the words she hadn’t said in so many years:
“I love you, daddy.”
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