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HighSanguinaryPriest
We have an official rank list, which is simple for the EMF.
Recruit: A new recruit who has completed basic combat training.
Private: A soldier with at least a year of military experience.
Soldier: A soldier with distinction, and at least four years of military experience.
Officer: A soldier with at least a year of military experience, who's passed an intelligence/military test.
Lieutenant: An officer with at least four years of military experience.
Sergeant: Second-in-command of a force.
General: First-in-command of a force.
You can base your title off that, if it helps.
Regarding your Auger, you stated you'd be using your hands. The limitation would be that if he uses his power too much, he would freeze himself, which may lead to death, or injury. Another limitation is the speed of freezing, the faster you attempt to freeze someone, the more at risk you put your character. Your character won't succumb to injury easily, but that's just a potential limitation.
Regarding your history, it seems alright. Due to the way military ranks work, you can be a high position depending on military years served. I would just change the history to reflect how you obtained one of the above military ranks. You can choose between Recruit to Lieutenant. Sergeant and General are off limits to starting characters, but you will be able to create those types of characters in the future.
Overall, thank you for the character submission. Just fix those things, and you'll be good to go. You're free to post in the IC roleplay.
We have an official rank list, which is simple for the EMF.
Recruit: A new recruit who has completed basic combat training.
Private: A soldier with at least a year of military experience.
Soldier: A soldier with distinction, and at least four years of military experience.
Officer: A soldier with at least a year of military experience, who's passed an intelligence/military test.
Lieutenant: An officer with at least four years of military experience.
Sergeant: Second-in-command of a force.
General: First-in-command of a force.
You can base your title off that, if it helps.
Regarding your Auger, you stated you'd be using your hands. The limitation would be that if he uses his power too much, he would freeze himself, which may lead to death, or injury. Another limitation is the speed of freezing, the faster you attempt to freeze someone, the more at risk you put your character. Your character won't succumb to injury easily, but that's just a potential limitation.
Regarding your history, it seems alright. Due to the way military ranks work, you can be a high position depending on military years served. I would just change the history to reflect how you obtained one of the above military ranks. You can choose between Recruit to Lieutenant. Sergeant and General are off limits to starting characters, but you will be able to create those types of characters in the future.
Overall, thank you for the character submission. Just fix those things, and you'll be good to go. You're free to post in the IC roleplay.