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Digital Asking for more musical feedback

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One Thousand Club
I'm like a super shitty amateur composer, and I've written some songs. One's a medly of some very gay music, one's an arrangement of a somewhat popular song for high school choirs, one's a cover of Toto's Africa to the tune of I Dreamed a Dream from Les Mis, and finally I have two complete compositions:

Refuge: Refuge
This is a little bit Western-inspired song that's also kinda a cover of Come on Eileen. Oops. It's also written to loop infinitely, so if the ending is unsatisfying, that's why. It's a part of a set of a few songs I've been composing for a little side project, and, in my opinion, is probably the worst one out of the bunch, but it's the only finished one.

There Will Come Soft Rains: There Will Come Soft Rains
This is a purely original piece and adaptation of a very good poem by Sara Teasdale.

My other publicly released songs (including those mentioned in the first paragraph) can be found at B. Maloney | MuseScore

So what I'm looking for is some feedback, mostly constructive.

Also, I'm always looking for new projects so if you've got a video or a game or an RP that needs an original composition, hit me up.
 

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