As Yet Untitled

[Grey]

Stored here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UJuMFqfi2EBKK1oFlZeKEAya5KXi2KfPPH2zDpdCIs4/edit?usp=sharing


But do comment here or there, your choice. This is chapter one of a webserial I'm going to publish weekly once I've worked up a significant buffer and convinced Wiz to host it. Constructive criticism is vital.

 

[Stickdom]

Looks interesting, I'll have to thoroughly read it all the way through when I get the chance. But, just from a few introduction paragraphs, it looks promising.