[Across the States and Back!] Carlos "Charlie" Jimenez

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Carlos "Charlie" Jimenez

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Full Name: Carlos Manuel Jimenez

Nickname: Charlie

Age: 23

Role: The Player

Zodiac Sign: Scorpio

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Height: 5'11

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Brown

Outfits:Casual Style

Formal

Swimsuit

Business casual

Sporty

Bringing: 2 Suitcases

Backpack....

Clothes.

Laptop

Speakers

Twin Air mattress just in case.

Ipod.

A knife

Sunglasses

A bong

Drugs/Alcohol

Camera

Guitar

Guitar Case

Typewriter

Skateboard

Longboard

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Job(s): Air Force 2nd Lt. Preparing to go to Harvard for double masters in law and history. Blogger/Free Lance Writer. Occasional drug seller.

Personality: He has two personalities. Charlie then.... Charlie Phoenix. He created this "James Bond like Alpha male" in order to get what he wanted out of life. Essentially, he has brainwashed himself since the end of his fat years in high school to become this persona and so wont change back into the nice, fat, clowny kid anymore. The military has even further helped that personality develop. He is now more disciplined, less cocky and bold. He thinks hes invincible, but is humble enough to ever say it out loud. He feels the world is for the taking and that he, the phoenix will change it. He loves the phoenix. The phoenix is the culmination of which a Scorpio can becomes... a legend... Hes silent and observant. He knows hot to party hard. He takes risks, of course thinking about them beforehand now. Hes political, always trying to make the right friends. He wants his life to be a rap video. He wants to be THE one. The only thing that could change his ol' dawg ways? Love.... but he doubts that would happen anytime soon.

Ever since he was that chunky kid in middle school, Charlie always wondered... Why dont girls like me? This was a confusing time what with pubes and hormones and so naturally he wanted a girlfriend. It wasnt until high school that he learned that girls dont want some chunky, funny guy for a boyfriend, but a smooth talking, popular, asshole. An alpha male. He adopted a personality and by the time he was a junior he was fit, and invited to every high school party imaginable. By the time he was a senior he was a legend in his town, and took this into the air force academy. In the small town of colorado springs he avoided drug tests, made connections with the coolest people, and had lots of hook ups. Some of his fellow graduates say those years were hell. Charlie disagrees to the fully extent. Prepare to meet a smooth, analytically political, and sociable guy. He will remain calmin most situations, but when you set a timer on a bomb... eventually it explodes. Comprendes?

Bio: Oh man... I kinda of already said it. Well he grew up in a nice suburb with the same kids he knew all his life. He was just the chunky class clown growing up but decided that would change in high school. He would become alpha in all aspects. In connections, in school, in sports, and of course with women. He made it a priority to be ever present at parties and make friends. He decided to follow in his brothers footsteps and join the air force with the academy. The academy could not change his bigger than life personality, because he hid it so well and deceivingly. He is such a good liar that he wants to be a politician after he serves his twenty years.

Future Goals: Get Masters in Law and some history field. Practice for a year or two. Depending on commitment become a pilot. Get out of air force and get into politics. Become florida senator. Become president for two terms. Get out. Be rich as fuck. Smoke weed with grand kids when they hit 16.

Likes Food, Women, Drugs, Women, Reading, Women, Porn, Porn, Cooking, Women, Guitar, Tits, Walks, Ass............. Women.

Dislikes: Cock blockers, Women who dont like him, People who dont like him, Certain rules, Bad music, Clubs where people wont dance, Boring people, Being unoccupied

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Extras: I can fight... specially with a knife... hate to though.

Sleeping: Air mattress on the floor

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Could you check your URL Codes for Guitar Guitar Case and Typewriter.


Also could you make the personality not sound so much like a bio?


I like it, but leave the story telling to the bio ;)


Oh and the sleeping area needs to be changed =)
 
everytime i redo it it goes back to its original..... its annnoying as fuck
 
OKAY the really long ones aren't links...I have no idea what those are, that might be why the link isn't working...
 
Okay I looked through it found a few more broken URLs in the iteams...I took off the broken link so you can add the correct one back if you want.


All there's left to do is to clean up the Personality so it isn't a bio =)
 
thanks ill work on that. But ill just leave that paragraph specifically... working on the personality right now
 

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