EdithSpeaks
Five Thousand Club
But at it's most basic form the idea is that it's a futuristic world at war, so around 2055 let's say
And they've been warring for over thirty years, so most developments have been in weaponry and things such as that
But there is one island in the middle of the Pacific that has managed to keep itself conflict free, by marketing human weapons to both sides secretly
Instead of focusing on improving that actual weapons, they focused on their wielders and have since become the most advanced country in terms of genetic research and military training. The only reason their system still works is they don't allow immigration, keep this trade very hush-hush (even to their own citizens), and don't share their secrets with anyone outside of their own production system. Of course other countries have attempted to make these super-humans but none have been as successful. The only human weapons that are actually traded outside of their own country are the ones from this island, which I call Brier for some reason. And what makes them identifiable is the fact that they're barcoded. The more advanced, the more obvious the placement of the barcode. And these are people who are secretly modified in the womb and then supposedly 'kidnapped' once they are developed enough to begin training. So most of these people have been able to kill since age three. Some of them are even mutants, such as having scales or fox ears or being so mentally advanced they are essentially telepathic.
And that's kind of it
As for why the world is at war, well that's one of the things I'm stuck on. I think at it's very basis it's a power war, where both sides are fighting for control over the other. But obviously the war isn't the real basis of the setting. The real basis is Brier.
And that's about it...I think.
Oh WAIT
I forgot to say why I even had this idea in the first place
I wanted to look into the flaws of these human weapons that I have yet to title
Their emotional flaws, because despite being categorized as killing machines, they're still humans
They can't help but feel guilt and conflict and yet they want to survive and to do so, they have to continue killing
The fact that they have no real motivation to fight for either side than their own life makes them feel even worse, since they can't help but feel remarkably selfish and disgusting
Some ignore it, some accept it, and some tear themselves down, so you'd end up with a load of very conflicted characters
I had an intriguing idea for a male character who had already torn himself down, and had since then become fully acceptant of the fact that he was a despicable human being, so yeah he was one idea for a character
The other character was the 'dream' girl who was freshly bought, and her guide through the entire mess of it all was going to be this male character, who was a mess himself.
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
History:
Appearance:
Other:
Name: Reese
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Personality: Reese is a very quiet but pained person. After being just a weapon all his life, he's just gotten tired of everything and resigned to it all. It was easier to rationalize doing anything to live when he was a child, because it was all he knew, but as time went on he started to hate himself for what he'd done. Eventually he settled on the notion that the pain of continued living was his punishment for the actions he continued to take, following orders from his owners. He's quiet and doesn't speak unnecessarily, but when he speaks he says whatever he pleases. If it gets him beaten, he just takes it. More punishment, he reasons. He's taken to wearing a mask, to frighten those he's faced against and to keep himself from being able to connect with anyone the way all humans and even experiments do, through facial expressions and eye contact. Punishment he can take, but making and losing connections like that he can't stand anymore.
History: Reese was stolen from the hospital as a baby, raised to strength quickly and efficiently, and sold at the age of six. By then, he'd already taken his first few lives - and by age ten he'd slaughtered a whole platoon all by himself, without so much as a scratch to show for it. By his teenage years, he was virtually unstoppable and beginning to be well known, enough that others could prepare for him. He started wearing the mask then, to hide his identity as best he could, and for psychological warfare. He's being taken away from direct warfare, for now, because his owners fear their most valuable weapon breaking down to pieces too soon, and is being used to train a new one. A future replacement, perhaps.
Appearance:
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/57a8bdd9f3416_Jafar_full_1417187.jpg.82f2e94e082e0b245c8331559905a719.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3098" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/57a8bdd9f3416_Jafar_full_1417187.jpg.82f2e94e082e0b245c8331559905a719.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Iya-chen_full_1529730.jpg.97abc31a860adf00c46664f77fec30af.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3099" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Iya-chen_full_1529730.jpg.97abc31a860adf00c46664f77fec30af.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>
(Mask)
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/4336362924_1a1ed522a5.jpg.85a6239ae435de9de51a0288ef3a539c.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3100" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/4336362924_1a1ed522a5.jpg.85a6239ae435de9de51a0288ef3a539c.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>
He has cheetah spots in a long triangle down his back, the widest part on his shoulders, and the thinnest at the base of his spine. His eyes are yellow, with the pupils of a cat or lizard, but at times its difficult to see them through the mask. His incisors are also longer than humans'.
Other: He was given the numbered designation of 325, but picked the name 'Reese' for himself when he was young, after deciding which of the names he'd heard around him he liked best. He's not a newer model, given his age, but he's impossibly strong and fast, and continues to best even the newer projects that come out. No one knows why he continues to be one of the best, but he's kept around for that purpose.
((Oh, hey, maybe later we can have a younger character/child come into play to help them learn compassion/morality? . . . Mostly because I found this picture, and he's so adorable I want to use him somewhere :3 It's just, he's bandaged up and bleeding a little, but his expression's all serene and he's just like "Look - life," and it's adorbs X3)
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Naegi_Makoto_full_1546939.jpg.831d938a40d31b5ecc2189a89d38aa60.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3103" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Naegi_Makoto_full_1546939.jpg.831d938a40d31b5ecc2189a89d38aa60.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>
And they've been warring for over thirty years, so most developments have been in weaponry and things such as that
But there is one island in the middle of the Pacific that has managed to keep itself conflict free, by marketing human weapons to both sides secretly
Instead of focusing on improving that actual weapons, they focused on their wielders and have since become the most advanced country in terms of genetic research and military training. The only reason their system still works is they don't allow immigration, keep this trade very hush-hush (even to their own citizens), and don't share their secrets with anyone outside of their own production system. Of course other countries have attempted to make these super-humans but none have been as successful. The only human weapons that are actually traded outside of their own country are the ones from this island, which I call Brier for some reason. And what makes them identifiable is the fact that they're barcoded. The more advanced, the more obvious the placement of the barcode. And these are people who are secretly modified in the womb and then supposedly 'kidnapped' once they are developed enough to begin training. So most of these people have been able to kill since age three. Some of them are even mutants, such as having scales or fox ears or being so mentally advanced they are essentially telepathic.
And that's kind of it
As for why the world is at war, well that's one of the things I'm stuck on. I think at it's very basis it's a power war, where both sides are fighting for control over the other. But obviously the war isn't the real basis of the setting. The real basis is Brier.
And that's about it...I think.
Oh WAIT
I forgot to say why I even had this idea in the first place
I wanted to look into the flaws of these human weapons that I have yet to title
Their emotional flaws, because despite being categorized as killing machines, they're still humans
They can't help but feel guilt and conflict and yet they want to survive and to do so, they have to continue killing
The fact that they have no real motivation to fight for either side than their own life makes them feel even worse, since they can't help but feel remarkably selfish and disgusting
Some ignore it, some accept it, and some tear themselves down, so you'd end up with a load of very conflicted characters
I had an intriguing idea for a male character who had already torn himself down, and had since then become fully acceptant of the fact that he was a despicable human being, so yeah he was one idea for a character
The other character was the 'dream' girl who was freshly bought, and her guide through the entire mess of it all was going to be this male character, who was a mess himself.
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
History:
Appearance:
Other:
Name: Reese
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Personality: Reese is a very quiet but pained person. After being just a weapon all his life, he's just gotten tired of everything and resigned to it all. It was easier to rationalize doing anything to live when he was a child, because it was all he knew, but as time went on he started to hate himself for what he'd done. Eventually he settled on the notion that the pain of continued living was his punishment for the actions he continued to take, following orders from his owners. He's quiet and doesn't speak unnecessarily, but when he speaks he says whatever he pleases. If it gets him beaten, he just takes it. More punishment, he reasons. He's taken to wearing a mask, to frighten those he's faced against and to keep himself from being able to connect with anyone the way all humans and even experiments do, through facial expressions and eye contact. Punishment he can take, but making and losing connections like that he can't stand anymore.
History: Reese was stolen from the hospital as a baby, raised to strength quickly and efficiently, and sold at the age of six. By then, he'd already taken his first few lives - and by age ten he'd slaughtered a whole platoon all by himself, without so much as a scratch to show for it. By his teenage years, he was virtually unstoppable and beginning to be well known, enough that others could prepare for him. He started wearing the mask then, to hide his identity as best he could, and for psychological warfare. He's being taken away from direct warfare, for now, because his owners fear their most valuable weapon breaking down to pieces too soon, and is being used to train a new one. A future replacement, perhaps.
Appearance:
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/57a8bdd9f3416_Jafar_full_1417187.jpg.82f2e94e082e0b245c8331559905a719.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3098" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/57a8bdd9f3416_Jafar_full_1417187.jpg.82f2e94e082e0b245c8331559905a719.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Iya-chen_full_1529730.jpg.97abc31a860adf00c46664f77fec30af.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3099" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Iya-chen_full_1529730.jpg.97abc31a860adf00c46664f77fec30af.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>
(Mask)
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/4336362924_1a1ed522a5.jpg.85a6239ae435de9de51a0288ef3a539c.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3100" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/4336362924_1a1ed522a5.jpg.85a6239ae435de9de51a0288ef3a539c.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>
He has cheetah spots in a long triangle down his back, the widest part on his shoulders, and the thinnest at the base of his spine. His eyes are yellow, with the pupils of a cat or lizard, but at times its difficult to see them through the mask. His incisors are also longer than humans'.
Other: He was given the numbered designation of 325, but picked the name 'Reese' for himself when he was young, after deciding which of the names he'd heard around him he liked best. He's not a newer model, given his age, but he's impossibly strong and fast, and continues to best even the newer projects that come out. No one knows why he continues to be one of the best, but he's kept around for that purpose.
((Oh, hey, maybe later we can have a younger character/child come into play to help them learn compassion/morality? . . . Mostly because I found this picture, and he's so adorable I want to use him somewhere :3 It's just, he's bandaged up and bleeding a little, but his expression's all serene and he's just like "Look - life," and it's adorbs X3)
<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Naegi_Makoto_full_1546939.jpg.831d938a40d31b5ecc2189a89d38aa60.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="3103" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2013_07/Naegi_Makoto_full_1546939.jpg.831d938a40d31b5ecc2189a89d38aa60.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>