Other a dream I never had

[rodent]

Everyone had dreams about race cars and rainbow all the dreams I never had. Last Friday everything changed we were being threatened by some clowns and by we the hole city no the hole state. That's when  their beautiful dreams became nightmares or more like dreams that would never come true. Dreams of a big cake would become a nightmare of a human head on your plate.  A dream of running a marathon became a dream of running from a train controlled by a maniac who wants to see you dead. And for me I have the same dreams of killing my brother because he hurt my mom or being shot on stage things like that.

 

[Whale]

Oh! Are you a writer?

 

[rodent]

@Whale yes actually

 

[Whale]

Cool! I consider myself one too. Although I have not posted any on RPN. But maybe someday I will. Do you have an editor?

 

[rodent]

@Whale yes kinda well shes more like a part time editor

 

[Whale]

Awesome! Did she edit this one? I just couldn't help but see one word that happened to be malplaced. (I feel like I am over swimming my bounds XD)

 

[rodent]

@Whale no she didn't shes on her day off so yeah. I'm pretty bad at these things without her. I suck I know

 

[Whale]

No no xD  Your actual writing is amazing! Just the one word... hole. Hole is like a ditch hole. 


Whole I think is the correct word. Other than that, you did amazing! I really like it. 

 

[rodent]

@Whale you really like it?

 

[rodent]

@Whale no one has ever told me they like my writing well except my editor but shes gets payed to say that

 

[Whale]

Friend! You deserve it. Your writing is amazing! 

 

[rodent]

@Whale You really think so? That means a lot

 

[cadence]

Eh, I second what my fishy friend said. You have obvious skill - nice job.  

 

[rodent]

@Ambela lol thanks

 

[Whale]

I 100% think so!!!

 

[rodent]

@Whale thank you I appreciate it

 

[rodent]

@Whale I don't know if I can ask this because I don't know the boundaries of the system but do you have wattpad?

 

[Whale]

Yes in fact I do! @rodent

 

[rodent]

@Whale really?! C


@Whale oops I didn't mean to put c lol

 

[Whale]

xD  yup! I just posted the prologue to my new book if you'd like to check it out. 


The Messenger by aye-aye911


That's my new book. 

 

[rodent]

@Whale k i'll go there right now

 

[Whale]

Cool thanks!

 

[rodent]

@Whale found it!

 

[Whale]

Cool! How did you like it?

 

[rodent]

@Whale I truly loved it