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Fantasy A Call To Arms- OOC

So... I'm looking at the character that I've drawn and I can say safely that I was better off asking Google or hiring someone, cause I am apparently useless at anything besides pixel art when it comes to computer art. Maybe I'm raising the bar to high, but I'm just gonna try to describe her using text and keep working on my skills with Krita.
 
So anthropomorphic characters have been established to be accepted. What if said Anthro was a mutated variant that gave it a Centaur like design? Perhaps I'll make the sheet and allow my description determine it
 
So I know that I'm not the GM, but...

Good GOD Gryphtaur Gryphtaur

That is simply the longest CS I have ever seen in my time here. That is way bigger than it needs to be.

EDIT: ahem. Sorry if that came across as rude, I was a bit tired this morning. Let me say this differently: go look at a few other character threads and see how long they typically are. Then shorten it respectively to match the size of other character sheets. Okay?

Sorry for sounding rude, and thank you for your time.
 
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This has probably been established and I missed it or something but what are the kingdoms?

Thank you
 
Mad Mechanic said:
So I know that I'm not the GM, but...

Good GOD Gryphtaur Gryphtaur

That is simply the longest CS I have ever seen in my time here. That is way bigger than it needs to be.

EDIT: ahem. Sorry if that came across as rude, I was a bit tired this morning. Let me say this differently: go look at a few other character threads and see how long they typically are. Then shorten it respectively to match the size of other character sheets. Okay?

Sorry for sounding rude, and thank you for your time.
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Sounds more true than rude, honestly. I understand his CS is perhaps a bit too much. But that's kinda the point of the character. He's a half parody of sorts who's meant to be a bit over the top. Probably why he's my favorite amongst my small bunch. But I took alot of the powers I'll likely not he using. Hopefully this shortens it enough, otherwise I'm not quite sure where to go from here.
 
Griffintaur said:
Sounds more true than rude, honestly. I understand his CS is perhaps a bit too much. But that's kinda the point of the character. He's a half parody of sorts who's meant to be a bit over the top. Probably why he's my favorite amongst my small bunch. But I took alot of the powers I'll likely not he using. Hopefully this shortens it enough, otherwise I'm not quite sure where to go from here.
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I was mostly thinking about the personality and appearance sections. You have nine paragraphs worth of appearance. A good and detailed description of your character is good, but not so many details that you start to get them confused. Understand what I'm saying?

It is a bit tricky to get the hang of, I haven't gotten the hang of it either. But I typically go for one, two or three paragraphs for appearance and personality. But nine is way to much information to take in.

Again, maybe this is out of line for me to be saying, but I do hope I am helping you to understand the problem.
 
I understand completely. There was a preemptive warning of a 1,500 word description. With a character like Tharr, it's kinda necessary and there's a lot to describe between his 2 bodies and 8 different limbs plus all the small stuff I decided to add. If a GM has issue with it's length, I can narrow it down with bullet points. Might be the simplest thing
 
Griffintaur said:
I understand completely. There was a preemptive warning of a 1,500 word description. With a character like Tharr, it's kinda necessary and there's a lot to describe between his 2 bodies and 8 different limbs plus all the small stuff I decided to add. If a GM has issue with it's length, I can narrow it down with bullet points. Might be the simplest thing
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Yeah, I can see his centauroid body being kinda hard to describe with a small amount of words.

It is a cool idea, I have to say. Wonderfully weird. Strange magical creatures have always been a favorite of mine.
 
Berries Berries I have a feeling from your CS so far that Freddy is not going to be a front lines soldier, more likely to be a mage who shoots fire from the back. Am I guessing correctly?
 
It seems like it'll be quite the spectacle. I'd hate to miss out on it. I just gotta blow some dust off some CSs. Maybe I'll add a Thermokinetic wolverine to the mix.
 
Mad Mechanic said:
I'm guessing the extra 20% is to account for the likelihood of him getting killed, reanimated and killed again.
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But of course! Zombie Freddie ftw. I gave him a small defense spell though so I think that gives us a solid 101% chance death, luckily for my poor handless child. XD

Axion Axion My CS is finished. ^^ Hopefully it's ok.
 
Proletariat said:
Lol if this RP actually takes off it is going to be the most rag tag band I have ever seen in all my years as a roleplayer.
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So far my king you've hired a megalomaniac, an insomniac, a vile rat-demon hybrid, and a falcon scout. And not one of them serves in our military. What is wrong with you.
 
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