I skimmed through this conversation and what I got is that 1) Pari is an emotional and physical obstacle that can span planets 2) Rags is prepared to kill a man
Sorry for not posting. I do have an idea on how I want to introduce Fredrick but it is kind of out of the way of the other characters and I'm worried it might not fit in
Name - Fredrick Sol
Age - 29
Species - Due to a curse and a witch, crocodile man
Brief Backstory - Fredrick Sol was a knight before the witch's curse had transformed him into the man croc he is today. Although it was not as if Fredrick was a Prince Charming figure type of knight, but more of a...
I'm thinking of a stoic and stout crocodilian knight type of guy but haven't figured out backstory. Maybe he has extremly bad luck when it comes to his exploits, like being the second warrior to come and save a princess. All my first draft ideas are kinda sucky so eh.