Waking up from hunger, Hayden went down only to find her brother sitting on the couch. Her eyes narrowed slightly, but she thought nothing of it. She'd been living with her brother for a little while now, and although it was more enjoyable than living at home, she was bored out of her head. She...
As said the second was a set-up so I'll add more to that any time soon,
I shall check Hayden and put some meaningful words in there -somewhere- when I can find them within myslef :3And when would that anytime be best :3 since it's pretty quiet atm...
Ok, so this is what I have atm...
I'm happy about the first one, but I'm thinking about some additions to the second ^-^ it's still a bit meager... Tell me what you think!
Ok, now I'm confused, are you pulling out or not?
Arrasou, I got it. Basically, in my mind it just doesn't add up all too good. Sorry it wasn't what you expected. I told you already I'm very picky and fussy about character sheets.
Ok, I'm not going to beat around the bush... I'm just going to list things I feel are a bit... off. Don't take it personally.
Firstly, which house does he serve? He's a male Geisha, an entertainer, right? Or is he a prostitute that just won't get off of his high horse.
What do you mean with...