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    Show Me Love (Science fiction romance)

    Sorry for not being around the last few days, kinda thought this idea would be dead for sure. On a side note I realize how ambiguous "everything changes" is - I meant her perspective on the world changes. Or some opportunities arise. Something like that. If you're still interested I'll begin...
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    How to create a good RP character?

    Here's some cherry-picked (by me) advice from Emma Coats (director and Pixar storyboard artist): 1. You admire a character for trying more than for their successes. 2. You gotta keep in mind what's interesting to you as an audience, not what's fun to do as a writer. They can be v. different...
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    Show Me Love (Science fiction romance)

    I never knew how to start these things off so I'll get right to the point, and as you begin reading, if I haven't made myself sufficiently clear on something, just give me a nudge. Summary: It's a few decades in the future, and the Western Man is a proud but tragic figure because, while he...
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    Creative Process?

    Usually it's good to do a bit of brainstorming and just writing down any idea you think of, even if it's absurd and crazy, because it will boost creative thoughts and you'll encourage yourself to continue coming up with ideas. Start with something very open like "What would I like to have in...
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    Proper explanation

    I misunderstood. Sorry for the random trivia.
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    Proper explanation

    From Wikipedia: "A fade-out (also known as fade-to-black) refers to gradually decreasing the intensity of light until none is shining on the stage." In movies it was also used to end a film or a scene of a film by causing the image to disappear and become dark because it was customary to close...
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    Neon (Future Series Character)

    Pretty well-rounded character. Be careful not to focus too much on him being emotional and clingy. It would be nice if you could flesh out his other traits such as how he can get what he wants, maybe add a few interests or hobbies, or something he's knowledgeable about. Aside from that my only...
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    Shinukara

    You may need to tone down some of the abilities and knowledge or balance it out with a few weaknesses. Currently he comes across as a prodigy with cute wolf ears who is also respectable, selfless and good looking. I think one of two routes would be good: Either he (1) has some knowledge in a...
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    First Person Perspective-why no one uses it?

    First person is ten times harder to become even somewhat proficient at than third person because when you write in third person you can allow yourself to describe things your character wouldn't know or see, and it'll be understood that your character simply missed them. Furthermore, you can be...
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