He walks across the sidewalk. In his khakis and a combine shirt from his last birthday, he hears a buzz in his pocket. He sticks his hand inside it and pulls out his phone. He sees one text from you and a smile spreads across his face. Unable to walk without texting back, he accidentally runs...
Agreed. I don't use futuristic or characters like such. But if there's a fist fight or something with my character; I won't say " he grabs you and pushes you against a wall, punching you in the temple which knocks you out* " It honestly makes me mad and irritated.
@CHIMNY
What bothers me..
I'd have to say the people that make common, (and by common, I mean repeated) mechanical or spelling errors.
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Not only does that bother me, but also the role players that say stuff like - *smiles*, *nods*, *laughs*.
It's not...