I apologize as well, my life got hectic over the past couple weeks and I haven't had much energy for creativity. I'll try to get a post up within the next week, though. I don't want to make everyone wait even longer >.<
I'm sorry I still haven't replied yet. I've been dealing with a lot recently and haven't felt like I've had the energy to think about writing much less actually write. But I'll try to get to it soon, so I don't keep people waiting forever.
I'm sorry for how quiet I've been. These past couple of weeks have been really mentally and emotionally trying for me, and I haven't felt like I've had much to spare on creativity. But I'd like to get back to writing more, and may try to think of something for Els to do until we're able to start...
Cleo glanced up and in Finn's direction when he started talking to her again and said his farewell, but didn't say anything. Her eyes bore into the back of his head as he made his way to the front of the bus, until he stepped out and she was left looking at nothing. Despite her misgivings, he...
Hope you've been alright. I've just been tired; I think my new medication is to blame for that. I've also just been unsure of what to write, on top of wanting to let Gnome write something before thinking about another post. I'm sorry for not being more active or more talkative, I've just been...
I also would think there would be a very good chance that Han'ra would have already met Ish-Aileen on his travels since that's something they have in common, in case that's something we want to try to plan for ^^
I've gotten done most of the updating that I had meant to, accept for some contacts and miscellaneous stuff. But my sheet for Han'ra is basically done apart from those things now >.<
Cleo's eyes widened a bit in surprise at Finn's response. Honestly, she hadn't even been expecting a response at all. She had grown rather used to losing herself within her mind and having to sort herself out alone, and had almost forgotten that she was in the middle of a conversation once those...
I know we're probably still waiting on people, but just in case I thought I would say that I'm ready for us to arrive. I just haven't written anything recently because Cleo was just in the middle of a conversation and it would feel weird for me to just move on from that without something else...
Yeah, I also admit that I take criticism really poorly, but that's a good reason to get it from people who I know aren't trying to make me feel bad. Something I know I need to work on.
Thank you for your analysis, I'm glad that you think I'm doing a good job. I'll try to think about other...
I don't just claim it, but this is something I enjoy so I try to put in the effort even if I'm new >.<
And I apologize if it's annoying, I recognize that because of my insecurity I tend to undervalue what I can do and be overcautious in self-analysis. That's kind of why I ask for feedback...
When Els awoke her sheets were damp with sweat and her breathing was shallow. Groggily fluttering her eyelids open to the dim light filtering in through the covered windows, she pulled herself upright, using more effort than one would expect for such a simple action. As she came to a sitting...
Honestly I could probably put it up now and I might, since I just realized I can use "Mr. Fletcher" for Bearach's father. So that should be added pretty soon!
Ah xD
Well, I'd rather leave it up to you since they're your character's parents, but I can come up with at least at least a name for Bearach's father if you don't feel like it. Otherwise I'm fine with waiting ^^;
Otherwise, barring another check through, I think I have most of my first post...