18). Xack
As the other inmates fell, and wraiths overtook the arena, Xack took his time. Getting into an assassins stance, ready to pounce.
He immediately heard the wretched, blood curdling scream of a wraith. It appeared that Nak had shot an arrow into its head. Another one followed suit...
17). Nak
“Are you….” Nak stared at the defenseless man. The demon rolled his eyes, speaking under his breath. “You have to be kidding…”
Puk peaked out of Nak’s jacket and snickered, “You really found yourself a good one didn't you.” Before being stuffed back inside. He had grabbed two...
16). Xack
The prisoners spread around the large dome like structure. The arena itself was a perfect circle of two hundred yards in each direction from the center. Xack kicked the red dusty dirt and left his foots impression inside of it. The young man looked around and saw the cheering crowd...
15.5). (B Plot)
“Stay still, I can heal you when you squirm like that.” Her furry brown ears drooped in concentration trying her best not to hurt her comrad. The face that normally shined brightly, warming the heart of all that came across it, was now covered with worry lines and blood...
15). Nak
Nak looked at the man beside him bewildered. ‘Is this guy freaking crazy…’ he thought to himself.
“He is a ranged attacker.” Xack said, seemingly to himself, before continuing with a chuckle, “Well it always gets the job done.”
‘Yeah, definitely fucking crazy…’ The demon thought with...
14). Xack
The head of white, spiked and messy hair bounced between the weapon racks quickly. He continued his loud search, filled with metallic crashes of falling steel swords and wooden thuds of wooden shields. He caught a glimpse in his hurried travel of the demon looking over a bow. ‘Be more...
Alright! Everything past this is starting the real story. I call this the Awakening because we did a final overhaul of the lore, characters, and writing style.
Some changes are:
Nak has Black hair
Puk is female
Nak is a Magical Archer
At first I was going to just do a summarization of these...
12). Xack
Xack glanced at him and his mysterious creature, not quite long enough to catch the guards attention. He shook his head yes.
“Let's go.” the guard said. It almost seemed reluctant. Like Jed thought the. Inevitable was coming. Of seeing more prisoners die. Xack looked around the now...
11). Nak
The dirty white haired young man started changing, looking like a kid in Christmas. 'Wonder how long he has been here...?' Nak pondered, though only for a moment.
"Umm, Jed is it? Could you take these cuffs o--," He was cut off by a snap of a finger, not Jed's, but a mage that stepped...
10). Xack
"We won't this time Jed." Xack said to the guard the light began to pierce the building. Xack’s white hair glew in the light. "What's on the menu today Jed? Another wraith?" He asked. And looking at the guard. He shook his head yes. Xack smirked and looked at Nak. "I don't know if...
9). Nak
'An arena he says...' Nak thought to himself. 'That's much better than I had expected. Doubt there'd be a basilisk but can't hurt to get some more experience'
As the sound of footsteps echoed and the rattle of keys grew closer, he could sense the outstretched hand of the newly...
8). Xack
He looked at the man, seeing the blood go down his chin. And he knew it was time to get serious, as He heard the footsteps. 'Here they come’ Chassis said.
"Its an arena" he told him.. "they throw us in in it twice a week to fight different monsters and each other." His voice drifted...
7). Nak
"Fuck nobles am I right...?" Nak chuckled, thinking of his father and the devil kingdom his clan served. He hated nobility and they're smug easy lives. And he was just supposed to lay down his life for them because of their birth. Mid thought and chuckle, he coughed up blood. Internal...
6). Xack
'He didn't answer us' Chassis said. "Um to be completely honest" he said "I was caught sleeping with a Nobleman's mistress and he put a pretty heavy bounty on me." He paused and leaned up against the wall. He was starting to get more antsy than usual. "He may have gotten mad about the...
5). Nak
'Honorable huh...' Nak thought, 'Though I'm not one to talk. At least I'm not crazy. He got caught and thrown in here too, so he can't be all that tough.' But Nak wanted out as well, so this guy was his best bet. But he needed more information. "How'd you end up in here, and where is...
4). Xack
"Well, we tried busting out of the arena. Didn't work out that well, I got this nasty wound." He said indicating it even though the mancouldn't see it. "The hobbit made it a whole 4 feet out of his cell and the ogre made it to the door. I just walked back into my cell whenever they...
3). Nak
"Don't you know it's not polite to invade people personal space..." Nak spat as the man took his hand off his head. The poison hadn't fully wore off, but it still took everything Nak had to keep himself contained. The young man in front of him seemed quite confident in himself, and his...