Saga of the Broken Sword

[Persell]

So, I know I promised months ago that "Oh, my comic will be so up in such short notice" but, well, school and life and my artist being sick happened. But I wanted to say that the Saga of the Bound Sword (http://www.drunkduck.com/Saga_of_the_Bound_Sword/index.php) has at least four pages up. When it gets to a more mature phase (the art is cleaned up a bit more and all the prologue is finished) it'll be moved to another website. I just wanted to get a few cursory first impressions from folks.

 

[Ker'ion]

I like it.


Though you might want to work on differentiating between your human characters' expressions and appearances better.  The leader of the Linowan looks almost identical to the Haltan, just a different hair color.

 

[Jukashi]

I think it looks good! Your art style is very suitable to the theme of the story, or at least from what I can gather from 4 pages.

 

[Solfi]

Pretty nice...


... and I know I am a broken record, but...


page three: Magesty -> Majesty (I presume)

 

[Persell]

Och, thanks for the comments and criticisms! They've been taken to heart. Especially that typo that...that just sorta hurts.